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Surrender

To feel the rain upon the soul, an effervescent whisper. It speaks of calm, serene control, which lies within surrender. Quenching the thirst of the heart. That need of the unspoken. Then drifts along, becomes a part of tears that mend the broken.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/26/2013 3:32:00 PM
So beautifully written. The clarity and messages you write are wonderful.
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Date: 3/20/2013 1:24:00 PM
Great write. Loved it. Loved the metaphors and imagery. Talented Jen
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Date: 3/3/2013 9:13:00 PM
A beautiul poem..It speaks to me..thank you. BG
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