Surrender
To feel the rain upon the soul,
an effervescent whisper.
It speaks of calm, serene control,
which lies within surrender.
Quenching the thirst of the heart.
That need of the unspoken.
Then drifts along, becomes a part
of tears that mend the broken.
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