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Poetic Form: Personification
Inspired: 2024 April 25
*7th Place*
Surreality
Contest Judged: 2024 April 28
Sponsored by: Tom Woody
Image: Vesuvius/Tsunami/Earthquake by volcanocafe.org/express.com/wallpaperaccess.com
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I M P O R T A N T
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G H O S T S T O R I E S
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I M P O R T A N T
***Connection to Short Story***
G H O S T S T O R I E S
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Here I am, Shake & Bake in the Far Out West
where they now smoke down and out, their
new front yards as Lava Lady is Liquid Dating
our backyards getting her dance card filled
up down at the Jam Bury Your Town All for
Lava Lady live sacrifice night show owe to Glowing
Reviews and she's gotten her brother, Tidy
Mighty, All Washed Up since he redesigned
the shoreline to the envy of Picasso's Blue
Period. There is a New Kid who came around
Shaking Things Up and Jointing Up with those
Yard Long guys short on else. He's Split his Half of
the Take, lake, mountain, meadow as his Crack,
up guys start at no charge, all FreeBase and his
name's Charlie who's friends with homeless
Front Yard Weed Whackers be many oldtimers
long left as Shakey Wakey All Charlie & Tidy
Mighty Surf's Upland lap'g and lick'g until Lava Lady
Lavalingly spills out o'er Missed Takes of the
new breed, yet dating a Strange one, hail Fire
& Brimstone from Vulcan. She peep'ole her Q-T
EyeDears on a couple of his Points and he Ears
her Loud & Clear. Their CommonRobHurry will
cool-it to low-life level...be BirdsOfParadise pushers,
or mosey on WhoCaresWorld.com. As Nubians
get cozy, renamed stargazers Blaze & Trek to
Vulcan. Meanwhile, in our Nexus Episode, Far
Out Rest: where we'll find, still landowner and
house goner, sum day things will all add up;
Starring: SureIt's Lone Returner & DedUB Tacoma.
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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