William Kelii Kekaula Poet Personification

Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Personification
Inspired: 2024 April 25

 

*7th Place*
Surreality
Contest Judged: 2024 April 28
Sponsored by: Tom Woody

 

Image: Vesuvius/Tsunami/Earthquake by volcanocafe.org/express.com/wallpaperaccess.com

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Surreality: NEW

Here I am, Shake & Bake in the Far Out West
     where they now smoke down and out, their
          new front yards as Lava Lady is Liquid Dating
               our backyards getting her dance card filled
                    up down at the Jam Bury Your Town All for
               Lava Lady live sacrifice night show owe to Glowing 

Reviews and she's gotten her brother, Tidy 
     Mighty, All Washed Up since he redesigned 
          the shoreline to the envy of Picasso's Blue 
               Period. There is a New Kid who came around 
                    Shaking Things Up and Jointing Up with those
               Yard Long guys short on else. He's Split his Half of 

the Take, lake, mountain, meadow as his Crack, 
     up guys start at no charge, all FreeBase and his
          name's Charlie who's friends with homeless 
               Front Yard Weed Whackers be many oldtimers
                    long left as Shakey Wakey All Charlie & Tidy 
               Mighty Surf's Upland lap'g and lick'g until Lava Lady 

Lavalingly spills out o'er Missed Takes of the
     new breed, yet dating a Strange one, hail Fire 
          & Brimstone from Vulcan. She peep'ole her Q-T 
               EyeDears on a couple of his Points and he Ears 
                    her Loud & Clear. Their CommonRobHurry will
               cool-it to low-life level...be BirdsOfParadise pushers,

or mosey on WhoCaresWorld.com. As Nubians 
     get cozy, renamed stargazers Blaze & Trek to 
          Vulcan. Meanwhile, in our Nexus Episode, Far
               Out Rest: where we'll find, still landowner and 
                    house goner, sum day things will all add up; 
               Starring: SureIt's Lone Returner & DedUB Tacoma.

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Susan Ashley April 29, 2024 at 12:50 PM Dear William, your fantastical imageries and word play conjures captivating scenarios that thrill one's imagination. I especially adored "Lava Lady is Liquid Dating" Awesome! Loved it all my friend. Congratulations for your win in Tom's contest. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan William Kelii Kekaula April 29, 2024 at 1:33 PM Twas part of a birthday gift for the firstborn of April long Sci-Fi/Ghost/Fantasy/Horror<--not much on that one) poems, short stories, narratives, etc.--got him hooked since he was 6 now a 48 year old granddad. Appreciate it, Susan. Aloha, William