Surrealism Xii

My life went off 
In a blast 
.... Of a drop 
.... Of ink 
Eileen looked 
At the Blast 
With a smile 
As if, she discovered a nebula 
In the sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Mehta Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 6:30 AM
Wonderful write and congrats on your poem being featured this week, atef
Kimathi Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Hi Atef. Your poem has a very beautiful imagery! :-)
Heinrich Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 3:39 AM
Excellent! I enjoyed this :)
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