contest Sanctuary, Soft, Stir, Surreal, words
sponsor Constance La France
"Between amber light of twilight and rendered dark profound silence is found"...poet In a dim-lit realm where dreams are surreal time has no meaning pictures move in continuous motion and the mind travels in a dream state realm of awareness in this ethereal place, you appeared as a vision to fill the barren shore of my soul with yours where we wandered on the edge of life as it drifted by while we glimpsed the universe, before the ebb tide pulled us from shore to the far horizon of imagined sunsets that hung like a wispy curtain before a darker sense of being flowed towards us filled with stars that we gathered to hold in the palms of our hands as we circled the reflecting moon of wondrous wishes where we surrendered ourselves with the fervor of lovers drowning in ardent corners of our souls in tender mystical moments of magic soaked in a sea of enchantment where the intimacy of dreams binds us in a spiritual, peaceful, harmony of sensual sighs and serenity inviting a breathtaking eternal bliss of aromatic blooms from the light of our souls that covered the shore in a blanket of sea lavender that stayed in my mind long after my dream fell away and vanished with the shaded realms of wonder
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