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Surprise Me

turned quick nose to nose
comfort felt in knowing kiss
lovely your surprise

Copyright © Quoth Theraven | Year Posted 2021

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May 2, 2021 at 4:53 PM

A sweet one..

Caren Krutsinger

April 28, 2021 at 9:43 PM

ah, so tender and dainty pretty.

Panagiota Romios

April 21, 2021 at 11:06 PM

Needless today, I love this...a FAV but of course... Hope your weather is good. We had high80's in CA. Nights go downto the 40's....geepers... Panagiota

April 14, 2021 at 8:55 AM

Dear Richard, a sublime surprise elating every fiber of one's being. How beautiful and awakening a kiss can be! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Victor Buhagiar

April 12, 2021 at 11:33 PM

Brings me memories.

Andrea Dietrich

March 28, 2021 at 1:44 PM

what a sweet surprise.

March 27, 2021 at 8:37 PM

This is surely a nice surprise. Great one :)

March 26, 2021 at 8:00 PM

Powerful kiss, Richard. Great Senryu.

Linda Alice Fowler

March 26, 2021 at 8:17 AM

The best kind of surprise Richard - so sweet! :) Linda

March 25, 2021 at 9:53 PM

Lovely Senryu. eve

March 25, 2021 at 8:42 PM

--And your senryu surprise is a lovely treat for our eyes. Nicely done, Richard! ~ gw

March 25, 2021 at 11:03 AM

sweet ~

Victor Buhagiar

March 25, 2021 at 7:52 AM

Elation, for sure. Lovely senryu

March 25, 2021 at 6:26 AM

A sweet surprise!

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