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Surprise me

turned quick nose to nose comfort felt in knowing kiss lovely your surprise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/2/2021 4:53:00 PM
A sweet one..
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Date: 4/28/2021 9:43:00 PM
ah, so tender and dainty pretty.
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Date: 4/21/2021 11:06:00 PM
Needless today, I love this...a FAV but of course... Hope your weather is good. We had high80's in CA. Nights go downto the 40's....geepers... Panagiota
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Date: 4/14/2021 8:55:00 AM
Dear Richard, a sublime surprise elating every fiber of one's being. How beautiful and awakening a kiss can be! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/12/2021 11:33:00 PM
Brings me memories.
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Date: 3/28/2021 1:44:00 PM
what a sweet surprise.
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Date: 3/27/2021 8:37:00 PM
This is surely a nice surprise. Great one :)
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Date: 3/26/2021 8:00:00 PM
Powerful kiss, Richard. Great Senryu.
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Date: 3/26/2021 8:17:00 AM
The best kind of surprise Richard - so sweet! :) Linda
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Date: 3/25/2021 9:53:00 PM
Lovely Senryu. eve
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Date: 3/25/2021 8:42:00 PM
--And your senryu surprise is a lovely treat for our eyes. Nicely done, Richard! ~ gw
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Date: 3/25/2021 11:03:00 AM
sweet ~
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Date: 3/25/2021 7:52:00 AM
Elation, for sure. Lovely senryu
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Date: 3/25/2021 6:26:00 AM
A sweet surprise!
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