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a lovely soft fur coat . . . when my spouse first pleased me with a surprise gift jan. 2, 2023 for JCB Brul's The Best Gift Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/5/2023 5:45:00 PM
So sweet and adorable!
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Date: 1/5/2023 4:53:00 PM
Back to your monoku with Congratulations on your first place win Andrea.
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Date: 1/5/2023 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Many blessings to you
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Date: 1/4/2023 4:56:00 PM
A memory too difficult to replace, Andrea, the gift as well as the giver, Aloha William
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Date: 1/4/2023 3:07:00 PM
I really miss my fur coat. Alas, not much need for it in Texas. Congratulations - a wonderful write Andrea!
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Date: 1/4/2023 2:57:00 PM
Ooh…I feel cosy just reading this! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/4/2023 2:10:00 PM
Andrea, This Monoku is the very essence of a lovely romantic write. Congratulations. I always learn something new from your comments on my works. Thanks for your soupmail Howard
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Date: 1/4/2023 2:01:00 PM
During the colder months, this is a welcome and unexpected gift. I have no doubt that he succeeded in capturing your heart with that.  Big Congrats on your podium win, dear Andrea.
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Date: 1/4/2023 1:37:00 PM
cozy! :)
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Date: 1/2/2023 5:40:00 PM
Indeed a surprise gift for the winter. I am sure, with that he stole your heart ! :)
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Date: 1/2/2023 12:31:00 PM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. I know you enjoyed wearing that one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/2/2023 11:38:00 AM
He must have coughed up a lot of dough. A man with a good plan. Nice A!...ab
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Date: 1/2/2023 9:54:00 AM
A very nce surprise Andrea, best wishes
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