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Surprise Gift

a lovely soft fur coat . . . when my spouse  first pleased me with a surprise gift

jan. 2, 2023
for JCB Brul's The Best Gift Poetry Contest

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Unseeking Seeker

January 5, 2023 at 5:45 PM

So sweet and adorable!

Valsa George

January 5, 2023 at 4:53 PM

Back to your monoku with Congratulations on your first place win Andrea.

Eve Roper

January 5, 2023 at 4:15 PM

Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Many blessings to you

William Kelii Kekaula

January 4, 2023 at 4:56 PM

A memory too difficult to replace, Andrea, the gift as well as the giver, Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler

January 4, 2023 at 3:07 PM

I really miss my fur coat. Alas, not much need for it in Texas. Congratulations - a wonderful write Andrea!

Kim Rodrigues

January 4, 2023 at 2:57 PM

Ooh…I feel cosy just reading this! Congratulations!

Howard Kerr

January 4, 2023 at 2:10 PM

Andrea, This Monoku is the very essence of a lovely romantic write. Congratulations. I always learn something new from your comments on my works. Thanks for your soupmail Howard

Sotto Poet

January 4, 2023 at 2:01 PM

During the colder months, this is a welcome and unexpected gift. I have no doubt that he succeeded in capturing your heart with that. Big Congrats on your podium win, dear Andrea.