Surprise From My Love

One fine morning I had a thought,
from the love of my life,a surprise i sought.

She went blank on what she could give
after all she is all for whom I live

My request ,neither could she turn down
nor did she want to see my frown.

Then an awesome thought struck her
a poem she decided to write on her lover

Though a bit tough ,was her first one
and the flow of words came alone

Finally it was ready but she wasn't sure
whether it will be enough for her love's cure

So overwhelmed I felt, how could I ever tell
Just can tell that I Love you whether in heaven or hell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 15, 2010 at 4:50 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Biplab. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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December 14, 2010 at 2:10 PM
Nice frolicsome yet full of feelings, Biplav
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