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Surprise From My Love

One fine morning I had a thought, from the love of my life,a surprise i sought. She went blank on what she could give after all she is all for whom I live My request ,neither could she turn down nor did she want to see my frown. Then an awesome thought struck her a poem she decided to write on her lover Though a bit tough ,was her first one and the flow of words came alone Finally it was ready but she wasn't sure whether it will be enough for her love's cure So overwhelmed I felt, how could I ever tell Just can tell that I Love you whether in heaven or hell

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Date: 12/15/2010 4:50:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Biplab. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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Date: 12/14/2010 2:10:00 PM
Nice frolicsome yet full of feelings, Biplav
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