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Surplus Thoughts

counting deaths servants, circling these wayward surplus thoughts. Plucking one by one just as you pluck guitar strings. Surprisingly beautiful, as they flee from deaths servants. Pulling out his sickle to slice, slash anything in its path. Raping them of any existanced of mind. How lovely. I guess I'll take a number.

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Date: 12/17/2009 12:34:00 PM
Very creative and also intriguing, Jessica. While this is somewhat of a grim outlook on life, death does not conceed any favors to special people. Guess we're all in line, waiting for our numbers to be called. Thought-provoking poem! Love, carolyn
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