Surpassing Xanadu

“Conquering Xanadu’s enigmatic beauty is heaven’s majestic reality of God’s presence.” By the poet

Call me Xanadu---
     “an idyllic, exotic
      or luxurious place.”

     Considered was I as the
          Summer capital in 1274-1364 
          of the Mongol Empire.

          Claiming for prominence
               famous was I was then for 
               my palaces, gardens and waterways.

               Creating muse for poetry
                    I represent a condition of mystery
                    splendid luxury, and easy living. 

                    Carving an essence against enigmatic thought
                         my perspective delights in my being
                         a paradise, offering hope and peace.

                         Come to me as I point you to heaven* of biblical reality
                              such is abode of God with His grace, mercy and love 
                              beyond the blue for beauteous worship-praise.

                              Crystal clear is its radiance of holiness’ rays
                                   surpassing my glowing magnificence
                                   since in Heaven, with faith's reality, Christ reigns.

*1Peter 1:3-5 Blessed be the God and Father of our Lord Jesus Christ, which according to his abundant mercy hath begotten us again unto a lively hope by the resurrection of Jesus Christ from the dead, To an inheritance incorruptible, and undefiled, and that fadeth not away, reserved in heaven for you, Who are kept by the power of God through faith unto salvation ready to be revealed in the last time.

April 30, 2023
1st place, "Writing Challenge - Words with 'X'" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 5/3/2023.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 5/6/2023 3:59:00 PM
Congratulations Kabayan on this historical and creative depiction of paradise... I learned new things...
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Date: 5/5/2023 1:02:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely win in the contest, Beata :) - hugs
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Date: 5/4/2023 8:22:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. What a creative write/quote. I enjoyed reading it again.  Have a great/blessed day...............
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Date: 5/4/2023 6:16:00 AM
Beata, thank you so much for sharing your lovely poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations, I like your quote. !
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Date: 5/3/2023 9:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest ...Beata. Nice poem indeed.
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Date: 5/3/2023 9:17:00 PM
Hi Beata, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/30/2023 12:46:00 PM
I enjoyed your creative write/quote. Have a great/blessed day.....................
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