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I wrote the poem then found this image which fitted perfectly!

Surfers

Seven swarthy swimmers
Sailboard so silently
Surfing stormy seas

31st July 2016

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2016

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Vladislav Raven

August 5, 2016 at 7:50 AM

Hi Jan, love the alliteration, the content and the vision. Also an excellent picture to go with it. The picture and the words fit together brilliantly. Just excellent Jan. Hugs....Mike. XX. A seven for the vision.

August 7, 2016 at 4:11 PM

Many thanks Mike:-) It took less than a minute to write I woke with the words in my head:-) hugs Jan xx

Stephen Pennell

August 4, 2016 at 7:07 AM

superb :-)

August 4, 2016 at 8:24 AM

Thanks Stephen - I woke with the words in my head, leapt out of bed and wrote the poem in a minute:-) hugs Jan xx

August 1, 2016 at 2:44 PM

Nice!

August 1, 2016 at 6:20 PM

Thanks Mike:-) hugs jan xx

August 1, 2016 at 10:44 AM

Suffering succotash !! Sweet serenade !!

August 1, 2016 at 11:25 AM

Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

July 31, 2016 at 10:17 PM

Excellent, I love it!

August 1, 2016 at 3:16 AM

Thanks ML:-) hugs Jan xx

July 31, 2016 at 5:53 PM

love that alliteration, jan! great job!

July 31, 2016 at 5:55 PM

Took less than a minute to write - I woke up with it in my head:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

July 31, 2016 at 5:42 PM

good one!! Jan, I had the perfect picture that went with my poem i want to post soon But now when I look for it in images, it is not coming up with the other summer pictures. it's driving me crazy!!

July 31, 2016 at 5:55 PM

I copy the pic onto my poem when I save it on word or save the image address or save the page in my favourites:-) hugs Jan xx

July 31, 2016 at 5:34 PM

Makes me want to go to the beach! :)

July 31, 2016 at 5:37 PM

Thanks Cas:-) hugs jan xxx

July 31, 2016 at 5:28 PM

Fantastic alliteration, Jan! Kind of a tongue twister. How cool that you found that picture to match it. Blessings!

July 31, 2016 at 5:37 PM

I bounded out of bed to write it Kim was in my head when i woke up - when I found the picture this afternoon it fitted perfectly:-) hugs Jan xx

July 31, 2016 at 3:24 PM

Hi, Jan, amazing poetry, and so clever too...took nearly 10 minutes to post this comment, my soup is so bad today...

July 31, 2016 at 3:29 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Harry I bounced out of bed with these few words in my head - love it when inspiration hits me like that:-) My internet connection can be dodgy Harry especially in the last few days:-( hugs jan xx

July 31, 2016 at 3:23 PM

Does one of them drown at some point? :) great write!

July 31, 2016 at 3:26 PM

No surfers were injured during the writing of this poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars

July 31, 2016 at 2:09 PM

aha! Perfect picture! :)-luloo

July 31, 2016 at 2:10 PM

Thanks LuLoo:-) hugs jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 31, 2016 at 1:46 PM

My goodness, what a perfect Alliteration! A seven dear, Jan!

July 31, 2016 at 1:50 PM

Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

July 31, 2016 at 1:08 PM

Hi Jan, You penned a good Alliteration and the picture complimented it very well:-) Alexis

July 31, 2016 at 1:21 PM

Thanks Alexis - I thought of this just as I got out of bed this morning and dashed to write it down before the lines went from my brain:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 31, 2016 at 12:46 PM

- Nerves of steel ...... I never dared :) - Great written, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

July 31, 2016 at 1:06 PM

Nor me Anne Lise - there is a lovely bay on the Island and it is always busy with the tide is right - but the waves aren't as dramatic as those in the picture lol:-) hugs jan xx

July 31, 2016 at 8:38 AM

The art work goes well with this fine little write.

July 31, 2016 at 12:03 PM

Thanks Ronald:-) hugs jan xx

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