Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Surfer Dude

when the pain is too much to bear
I close my eyes and picture
surfing the waves of my youth
the ocean sounds get louder
till the roar takes over
and makes me see how
the afterlife might be



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Funom Makama June 15, 2020 at 7:22 AM This is brilliant. I feel blessed coming across this page. You have it in you, I will definitely come visiting again to enjoy the blessing of your deep mind. A great piece! Line Gauthier June 16, 2020 at 12:03 AM Thank you for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Funom.

Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 1:06 AM Great write Line.. Like a surfer, ride on the waves of life, bridle the horse of pain and move forward.. God bless you.. Line Gauthier June 14, 2020 at 10:30 AM Thanks, Jenish. Mind over matter ~

Gershon Wolf June 13, 2020 at 11:08 PM Great write, open to such a variety of interpretation. Lets the reader, like me, do the surfing! Bravo, Line! Be well, Gershon Line Gauthier June 14, 2020 at 12:39 AM Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.

Tom Cunningham June 13, 2020 at 9:41 PM Love surfing the waves of my youth, those waves passed quite a while ago now. Thought provoking. Well written Line. Tom Line Gauthier June 14, 2020 at 12:39 AM LOL ~ I hear you.