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when the pain is too much to bear I close my eyes and picture surfing the waves of my youth the ocean sounds get louder till the roar takes over and makes me see how the afterlife might be AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on June 13, 2020

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Date: 6/15/2020 7:22:00 AM
This is brilliant. I feel blessed coming across this page. You have it in you, I will definitely come visiting again to enjoy the blessing of your deep mind. A great piece!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/16/2020 12:03:00 AM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Funom.
Date: 6/14/2020 1:06:00 AM
Great write Line.. Like a surfer, ride on the waves of life, bridle the horse of pain and move forward.. God bless you..
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Date: 6/14/2020 10:30:00 AM
Thanks, Jenish. Mind over matter ~
Date: 6/13/2020 11:08:00 PM
Great write, open to such a variety of interpretation. Lets the reader, like me, do the surfing! Bravo, Line! Be well, Gershon
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Date: 6/14/2020 12:39:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/13/2020 9:41:00 PM
Love surfing the waves of my youth, those waves passed quite a while ago now. Thought provoking. Well written Line. Tom
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Date: 6/14/2020 12:39:00 AM
LOL ~ I hear you.