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Written: August 3rd, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ Through the shallow depths of my soul, I sail on a wild surface with no control. Passengers of dreams, we set sail, With the wind blowing through, we prevail. In this journey, we navigate, A lushness of views and emotions, subtle and innate The wind sighs secrets and plays on the flagpole. As we traverse the depths of our souls. Such blossoms dancing in the breeze, We wandered through the forest with ease. Mountains rise, majestic and grand, As we sail through this enchanted land. Whispers of the surface guide our way. Leading us to a brighter day. The wind caresses our weary souls. Blowing away the doubts that bear their toll Through every twist and turn we forego,  Finding strength we didn't know Passengers of our destiny, Navigating with grace and unity The forest whispers secrets profound, As ancient wisdom, we have found. The wind sings a melody so sweet, Guiding us with a rhythm unique.

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Date: 8/4/2023 6:36:00 AM
Sotto, that is a fine poem. The rhymes are superb. Keep Rolling.
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