'suppression"

A stroll on the high rise of men’s wall
The heart steadily depicts the mind’s fall
  Built of mind to suppress
  Within__  wickedness nests
One soul contemplates the mind’s gall

 In honor of Pablo Neruda(Poet, diplomat, and politician)

For Contest: Pablo Neruda
Sponsored by Raul Moreno 
Placed #10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/13/2010 4:33:00 PM
Sorry I am seeing this so late. congratulations on your win here, john. he surely was one soul who contemplated many things about humanity! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/7/2010 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win John in the Pablo Neruda contest sponsored by Raul Moreno. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 3:28:00 PM
Congrats Moses on your winning poem in Raul's contest with this amazing write on Neruda.. enjoy the success of victory ... with luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/6/2010 3:03:00 PM
John, congratulations on your placement in my Pablo Neruda contest...Raul
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Date: 5/25/2010 7:54:00 PM
this is a great tribute to Pablo.a mind of his own that no one can take.and 'spiceless' sounds like a good word to describe it as you commented.lol. also, good luck Moses, a very fine dedication. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/23/2010 8:59:00 PM
Powerful words, describe a powerful man.. best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 5/23/2010 8:57:00 PM
A nice tribute you paid to Pablo, John. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/23/2010 6:00:00 PM
A very nice write indeed, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 5/23/2010 4:40:00 PM
Very well written John... good write
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:47:00 PM
nice, good luck in contest
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