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'suppression"

A stroll on the high rise of men’s wall The heart steadily depicts the mind’s fall Built of mind to suppress Within__ wickedness nests One soul contemplates the mind’s gall In honor of Pablo Neruda(Poet, diplomat, and politician) For Contest: Pablo Neruda Sponsored by Raul Moreno Placed #10

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2010 4:33:00 PM

Sorry I am seeing this so late. congratulations on your win here, john. he surely was one soul who contemplated many things about humanity! LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2010 3:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your win John in the Pablo Neruda contest sponsored by Raul Moreno. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/6/2010 3:28:00 PM

Congrats Moses on your winning poem in Raul's contest with this amazing write on Neruda.. enjoy the success of victory ... with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/6/2010 3:03:00 PM

John, congratulations on your placement in my Pablo Neruda contest...Raul

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/25/2010 7:54:00 PM

this is a great tribute to Pablo.a mind of his own that no one can take.and 'spiceless' sounds like a good word to describe it as you commented.lol. also, good luck Moses, a very fine dedication. -Always&Forever Lynette