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Superstition

Throng of fishes Meet at shoreline Bad omen hap.

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Marilyn Williams

Date: 2/17/2025 12:02:00 AM

This style I know not. And it puts me in for it is short. Beautiful write

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 2/17/2025 6:25:00 AM

Than-Bauk poetry stem from Burma. It consist of 4 syllables in every line in free style. Standard Than-Bauk is rhyme first fourth syllable, third syllable for 2nd and 2nd syllable in last lines. The meaning varies defending on the poet's taste and style. Thank you, Marilyn, though may awe and new to you, the meaning may give any impact to the readers.