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Superstar

Orange megastar of rosy early morning skies,
Richer than all of the others' remote sparkling,
Powerful, charming and extremely charismatic,
Drawing all of nature, and the beautiful people.
Sunset stunner, captivating the adoring press,
Though black space is your permanent address!
A reclusive eccentric superstar, and so creative,
For the summertime is overcrowded with blooms.
And during nights, you lend light to pale moon!
Super rich and possessing the gold Midas touch,
The gazes of red sunflowers are on you all day!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Y. Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 12:57 PM
Hi Evelyn, I like where you went with this piece. I agree, nature has many superstars. Excellent job:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 3:13 PM
Thank you very much for those warm sentiments, Alexis. Have a wonderful week. :D
Poet Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Evelyn, Your writing is lovely and has the capacity to evoke the beauty of the bloom. I love it! A gentle, captivating flower that attracts everyone, regardless of age or background, all day and night. Poetry is not only beautiful, but it is its own blossom.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 3:29 AM
A superstar, indeed!
Buehler Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:58 AM
Yes, we all look up to the sun. :D
Buhagiar Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 10:27 PM
Exquisite flower that attracts all of us day and night. The poem is a flower of its own.
Buehler Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:59 AM
Now that's a lovely thought. Thank you.
Hankins Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 8:17 PM
Beautifully-written and so expressive of the bloom, Evelyn. I love it!
Buehler Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 8:36 PM
Thank you so much, Milton. :D
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