Supernova Girls

Pretty girls don't have to hide 
Scars with sweaters and lies. 
They don't have to cover up 
How ugly they feel inside. 
And lovely girls are not afraid 
Of the demons inside their mind. 
Normal girls don't cry at night 
And think of such monstrous things. 
And other girls don't have to smile
just to cover up their pain. 
Nice girls do not screw up 
And feel worse than they did in the first place. 
You may say that I'm lovely, or nice, or pretty. 
And you will see a broken smile shy upon my face. 
And at first you may think that I am actually okay. 
Until you get a closer look, and you notice 
The light in my eyes, is fading away.
I used to be one of those girls.. 
But I have been hardened. I have been changed. 
The innocence has gone and the darkness reigns. 
Years ago my bright eyes drowned 
Into solitary oceans of fear.. 
So don't mind my teary eyes
Thre next time you whisper those
Sweet nothings into my ear..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/9/2013 12:34:00 PM
Awesome! Love the part about broken smiles! I completely relate (except for the being a girl part of course)
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Karissa Kelley
Date: 9/18/2013 5:07:00 PM
Haha. Thank you!
Date: 8/13/2013 8:25:00 AM
All I can say Karissa is..... WOW!!!! You have touched my soul with this one!
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Karissa Kelley
Date: 8/14/2013 1:18:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment my friend! I've been reading your poetry as well, it's beautifully written. I am always in awe! :-)
Date: 8/12/2013 3:23:00 PM
This was dark & fierce. What a piercing ending. Excellent writing!
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Karissa Kelley
Date: 8/14/2013 1:17:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 8/12/2013 11:14:00 AM
- A poem written with emotion ... and very well written Karissa !!! - Have a nice day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/14/2013 1:16:00 AM
Thank you, you too!! Xoxo
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