Balveen Cheema Poet Quatrain

Supermoon Eclipse

(Blood Moon)

Fulsome Cynthia languishes  for her nightly rendezvous'
Besmeared in bloody red she stands before sun god 
Glowingly glides towards Endymion to  solemnise their vows
While his mother earth's shadow eclipses their union from star gazers


October 1, 2015
Contest: Supermoon Eclipse
Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2015 at 10:09 AM Big congrats in the contest. Balveen Cheema October 10, 2015 at 10:39 AM Thanks Andrea! You had already appreciated it. Love, Balveen

Skat A October 9, 2015 at 12:23 AM Balveen, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT Balveen Cheema October 9, 2015 at 1:46 AM Thank you so very much Skat! I am all moony! Love, Balveen

Sara Kendrick October 8, 2015 at 3:31 PM Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara Balveen Cheema October 9, 2015 at 1:48 AM Oh Sara! That's awfully kind of you! Love and thanks for reading my quatrain! Balveen

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 8, 2015 at 2:30 AM Wonderful write Balveen! Congrats on superb win! Balveen Cheema October 9, 2015 at 1:48 AM Thanks Upma!

Eve Roper October 7, 2015 at 2:18 PM Thank you so very much for participating in my contest and congratulations on your win. Eve

Jan Allison October 7, 2015 at 2:16 PM So beautifully penned Balveen many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan x

Dan Cwiak October 7, 2015 at 1:26 PM Very nicely put, especially the colors. Congratulations on your win. Balveen Cheema October 7, 2015 at 3:29 PM Thanks Dan and congratulations to you , too! Balveen Balveen Cheema October 7, 2015 at 1:52 PM Thanks Dan!

Constance La France October 1, 2015 at 2:09 PM Balveen, this is lovely for the contest, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, Zahra ... Balveen Cheema October 2, 2015 at 6:54 AM Your apprecitive holds everyone under scrutiny! Thanks for liking my fascination with the blood moon, Wings!

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2015 at 2:39 AM great personification! Balveen Cheema October 1, 2015 at 4:53 AM Thanks Andrea!

Michael Tor October 1, 2015 at 1:55 AM Excellent entry. Nice write Balveen. Balveen Cheema October 1, 2015 at 4:55 AM I'm glad you think so. Thanks Michael!