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Supermoon Eclipse


The dark sky beckons the celestial mage
With age-old runes and devilry
When shadows begin to cover the moon 
A cloud wafts by and laughs at me


09/29/15

Supermoon Eclipse-1st Place
Eve Roper
10/27/2015

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/14/2015 1:51:00 PM

What an excellent Quatrain you have penned my friend! It is beautiful with amazing imagery and wit! Congratulations and a 7 on your win! Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2015 1:13:00 PM

yours is one of the best I am seeing as I go down the winners' list. Congrats to you, Ralph. How is the day going for you?

James Inman
Date: 10/10/2015 2:05:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, love getting nice comments from you.

Skat A

Date: 10/9/2015 12:32:00 AM

James, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT

James Inman
Date: 10/9/2015 12:17:00 PM

Thanks, SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2015 3:21:00 PM

Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara

James Inman
Date: 10/9/2015 7:57:00 AM

Thanks for such a sweet comment Sara.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2015 3:35:00 PM

this must be so frustrating to miss it james congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman
Date: 10/9/2015 7:56:00 AM

Thanks Jan, yeah, but I've seen them before.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2015 3:03:00 PM

James, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. I went out at 8:30p.m. and it was so overcast I couldn't even see the moon. I was so upset to miss the eclipse I felt like your last line. Eve

James Inman
Date: 10/9/2015 7:55:00 AM

Wonderful contest Eve, thank you for hosting it. I feel your disappointment. I caught the very beginning but missed the main event. Thank you again.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/7/2015 12:14:00 AM

Very clever. I learned a new word - looked up 'mage.' I liked your write very much ... CayCay

James Inman
Date: 10/7/2015 3:38:00 AM

Thanks for sharing so much time with me tonight, CayCay.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2015 3:46:00 PM

I still have a few poems in the wings waiting to post. Depending on how fast contests fill up, I hang onto my poems and maybe post just one a day. This one probably won't be posted until next week!!