James Inman Poet Quatrain

Supermoon Eclipse

The dark sky beckons the celestial mage
With age-old runes and devilry
When shadows begin to cover the moon 
A cloud wafts by and laughs at me


09/29/15

Supermoon Eclipse-1st Place
Eve Roper
10/27/2015

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Pandita Sietesantos October 14, 2015 at 1:51 PM What an excellent Quatrain you have penned my friend! It is beautiful with amazing imagery and wit! Congratulations and a 7 on your win! Pandita

Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2015 at 1:13 PM yours is one of the best I am seeing as I go down the winners' list. Congrats to you, Ralph. How is the day going for you? James Inman October 10, 2015 at 2:05 PM Thanks Andrea, love getting nice comments from you.

Skat A October 9, 2015 at 12:32 AM James, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT James Inman October 9, 2015 at 12:17 PM Thanks, SKAT

Sara Kendrick October 8, 2015 at 3:21 PM Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara James Inman October 9, 2015 at 7:57 AM Thanks for such a sweet comment Sara.

Jan Allison October 7, 2015 at 3:35 PM this must be so frustrating to miss it james congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx James Inman October 9, 2015 at 7:56 AM Thanks Jan, yeah, but I've seen them before.

Eve Roper October 7, 2015 at 3:03 PM James, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. I went out at 8:30p.m. and it was so overcast I couldn't even see the moon. I was so upset to miss the eclipse I felt like your last line. Eve James Inman October 9, 2015 at 7:55 AM Wonderful contest Eve, thank you for hosting it. I feel your disappointment. I caught the very beginning but missed the main event. Thank you again.

CayCay Godwin October 7, 2015 at 12:14 AM Very clever. I learned a new word - looked up 'mage.' I liked your write very much ... CayCay James Inman October 7, 2015 at 3:38 AM Thanks for sharing so much time with me tonight, CayCay.

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2015 at 3:46 PM I still have a few poems in the wings waiting to post. Depending on how fast contests fill up, I hang onto my poems and maybe post just one a day. This one probably won't be posted until next week!!

Constance La France October 1, 2015 at 1:58 PM James, beautifully penned for the contest, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, Zahra

Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2015 at 3:41 PM this is fantastic. Mine is humorous, if I ever get it posted!! truly, though, Yours is one of my favorites of those I have seen James Inman September 29, 2015 at 8:56 PM Thanks Andrea. Looking for yours.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2015 at 1:10 PM - A little creepy moon :)) - Well done, good luck in the contest James ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) James Inman September 29, 2015 at 8:54 PM Thank you for the visit, Anne-Lise.