Supermoon

Brightly your light it fills the sky,
We sit and watch you from afar,
Slowly the dark creeps by and by,
Red is the color you now are.

10-07-2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 1:24 PM
this is cute! Good for you if you saw it. I missed out!!
Diemert Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 4:03 PM
We did watch it! had to wait for clouds to move out of the way here and there, but still exciting!
A  Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 12:35 AM
Marie, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT
Diemert Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 4:03 PM
Yeah!!! Thx!
A   Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 7:30 PM
Marie, This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Diemert Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 4:02 PM
Thanks :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Congrats on your great quatrain..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are a wonder like your winning work..Sara
Diemert Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 4:04 PM
Thanks Sara :)
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Marie, welcome to Poetry Soup. Thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve
Diemert Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 4:30 PM
Thank you so much :) Marie
A  Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 11:34 AM
Hi Marie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Diemert Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 4:31 PM
Thanks for the warm welcome :)
La France Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 8:30 AM
Marie, this is a lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it today, and I am rating it a 7, and welcome to poetry soup, enjoy the journey ~~
Diemert Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 4:31 PM
Thanks :)
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