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Superman

Superman My superman He doesn't wear a long red cape or fly in the air he can't kill off evil villains with the power of a single glare But what he does have is rare and cannot be seen I can't see no wrong in him, he's hardly ever mean He has a heart so pure and a charm so sweet I think he's heaven sent All the girls get googly eyes but they can't have my Mr. Clark Kent But ladies don't be discourage there's a superman out there waiting for you God will give a man that will change the world from the earth to the moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/7/2015 12:50:00 AM
Thank you for the feedback everyone! :)
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Date: 3/6/2015 11:02:00 PM
Don't live in dreams, Ashley Mack. See men as you see hu-men - flawed but with a heart!
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Date: 3/6/2015 10:59:00 PM
Superman is a dream fantasy of most women...nice attempt and loved it...A 6 from me...wish you all the best...lovely day..Ashley :-)
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Date: 3/6/2015 10:26:00 PM
Very nice pen Ashley! I truly enjoyed your sweet write, so very encouraging, so happy you found your special superman. Not many women do these days.A 7 from me! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.
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