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Superfluous Activity

Dripping words so sugary, light and fluffy insincerity Laying it on drizzling thick with a butter knife tongue Caramel verbal plums ... yum-yum You got red cherry cheeks, dispensing vanilla frosting tasty speech Blowing out mint bubblicious charm when you start cinnamon chewing your gums Sweet Alabama apple pie breath, full of caloric ingratiating death Syrupy vowels not good for my financial health Always got something Cheshire cheesecake slick up your consonant sleeve, a box of squiggly ... messy, gummy worm candy A plate piled up high with excessive flattery, so obvious, anybody with Ray Charles eyes they can see A bunch of chocolate covered marshmallow baloney, suspicious cooking superfluous activity All designed to thoroughly impress me, and infiltrate my personal treasury But I ain’t falling for the fake pastry bake, zero doughnuts is what your pockets ate All yours plans fell flat ... smack dab in the middle of an upside down devil cake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/13/2017 8:53:00 AM
Good morning Freddie, what a powerful straightforward honest write. I love the line about having Ray Charles eyes. It's always a joy to read your work Freddie have a blessed day.
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Date: 8/13/2017 12:40:00 AM
WoW! Freddie, I enjoyed this hard hitting in yo face and truthful write. "Snake in the grass" came to my mind as I was reading it. As always well done:-)Alexis
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Date: 8/12/2017 9:34:00 AM
What a great poem and so many amazing descriptions, Freddie! I forgot all about the 'Bubblicious'. I like the ending with the upside down devil cake. Very creative poem. I enjoyed reading this today :)
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