Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

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For the contest of Charles Messina

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Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

Wonderful are my memories of
the times I spent with all those I love.
Although not extraordinary, we
still managed to get along for free.

Free were the simple joys in our life.
We got along with such little strife.
Love that we shared was like a buffet
of good food that we enjoyed each day.

Of this is made the best of life’s bliss.

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Paula Goldsmith May 22, 2025 at 11:32 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Have a blessed day with your win................

Terry Miller May 22, 2025 at 8:41 AM Hi Andrea great poem and congratulations

Charles Messina May 22, 2025 at 6:47 AM Such a lovely poem, Andrea. But oops line (3) only has 8 syllables. Unless howmanysyllables is wrong (lol) Anyway, thanks for entering my contest and congratulations on your placement! Charlie

Victor Buhagiar April 7, 2025 at 1:24 AM A difficult contest. You did well. Best for a win.

CayCay Godwin April 6, 2025 at 11:00 AM You did it, glad something came to you incorporating all the requirements. One of the most difficult contests for me as far as quality vs. directions! I've sent u a soupmail in your 'teacher' capacity. Much love ... CayCay

Jay Narain April 6, 2025 at 10:41 AM Very well written poem Meets the difficult criteria.

Oliver Mckeithan April 5, 2025 at 11:33 PM Wonderful Andrea. Reflection on simple pleasure of love.

Karen Jones April 5, 2025 at 10:41 PM Aw it’s fun looking back over pleasant memories isn’t it? Love this!

Gershon Wolf April 5, 2025 at 9:48 PM Poem goes well with the title and with the memorable scene in the movie. Cheers, gw

Ann Peck April 5, 2025 at 7:24 PM I remember that word, too! It sometimes comes in handy. I love "free were the simple joys in our life..." That defines that time so beautifully.

Ink Empress April 5, 2025 at 12:24 PM Awwn such memories are truly ones that always remain as light within when all is dark! Love how youv expressed and written for this contest! I havent looked at the rules but im sure youv nailed it sweet andrea… Best wishes always Sending you light

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon April 5, 2025 at 6:21 AM Glad you fed my eyes with beauty again. Dietrich, I'm back after a long time holiday. Do well to review my recent poem as you have done in the past. Much love

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh April 5, 2025 at 4:44 AM Cherished memories of the good past.Like the poem