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*Example for my contest

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

Wonderful gifts, two newborn- heartbeats 
Life's grandest extraordinary treats 
And may they be blessed when they arrive
To love them to death while their alive 

Alive and good and with happiness 
Arrive our children and live in bliss 
Treats to your loved ones, hugs can be sweet 
Heartbeats will thump when two lovers meet 

It feels great to feel such happiness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Poteet Avatar
April 12, 2025 at 6:34 PM
We just had a new baby born in our family this past week - Sophie by name and she's a sweetie of course. A precious piece, Charles for everyone, but especially for nanas and papas.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 12:35 PM
happiness, heartbeats, extraordinary treats!
Dutta Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 10:44 AM
Very Nice and Interesting. Sure to try this contest. Have Good Days.
Woods Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 1:38 PM
You make it look easy! This is a toughie but I'll give it a go! I love a challenge! Sweet poem...xo
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 5:03 PM
I think this nice example will help me understand the challenge better. Thanks, Charles.
Allison Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 2:42 PM
gee this is a real challenge Charles, not sure i am up to it - i am denser not mensa and just a poop poet at heart lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Crandall Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 8:15 AM
wow, that's a really happy poem -great!
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