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Super Un Serious Friends

“butter flies and marshes mellow”, that’s what he said to me. did i look shocked — you bet, but i did him one better. “mine craft and more bid yeller,” I smirked, and he said, “wazzthatsposedtomean?” as if he was drunk, he slurred all his vegetables to gather, and i told him so — i true Lee did! “chalk a lot?” he asked, and i quibbled, “black board.” He threw his fist, dissed joined, “yor a wader.” “am not!” “are so!” “fire flies and pepper mints,” the subject changes. “side ways and rattled snakes,” i grin. Our friend ship sails with checkers and back bone. I say a final dead line, “butter’d milk and fired crackers,” we hear the good humor’d truck. we buy iced dreams and coco co la, as the city strolls by, way too serious. and we both shout, “ham or head? “Shark!” butter flies and marshes mellow Poetry Contest Kai Neumann - Sponsor

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Date: 7/26/2020 11:48:00 AM
Loved this witty muse of yours Kim. You crafted such an amusing one here. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2020 3:06:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi! Blessings xx
Date: 7/16/2020 4:49:00 PM
Kim congrats on your win!;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2020 5:19:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda!
Date: 7/16/2020 3:27:00 PM
Extremely creative and enjoyable. (OK, I had to read through twice...). Nice one, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2020 5:19:00 PM
Thanks, Eric! :) smiling
Date: 7/16/2020 9:30:00 AM
Back with congratulations Lovely! xomo <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2020 11:42:00 AM
Thank you, Mo!
Date: 7/16/2020 4:45:00 AM
Nice one. Congratulations. Kind wishes, Kai
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2020 11:42:00 AM
Thank you, Kai! A very fun contest to write for!
Date: 7/4/2020 4:41:00 AM
There is so much fun in this piece! Enough to brighten a dull day..An instant FAVE!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2020 7:02:00 AM
Yay! Thank you, JCB!
Date: 7/3/2020 11:08:00 PM
This is a story, a poem and could be easily turned into a song. I enjoyed it every which way!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2020 7:01:00 AM
Thank you! Happy 4th!
Date: 7/3/2020 12:26:00 PM
Outstanding writing! Challenges all I know about English language. Hilarious and unbelievable expressions that I ignore. Enjoyed every line dearest, Kim. I think this should be declared a winner. Hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2020 12:27:00 PM
Thanks! You made my day!
Date: 7/3/2020 11:11:00 AM
LOL! Oh that was fun!!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2020 11:21:00 AM
Thank! Glad I could make you laugh!

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