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Super Duper Discounts

There once was a man named Art 
Who was thrifty and shopped at WalMart 
He was happy with life
As he rode on his bike
Till the bearings fell apart ...



By: Kyle Ezra Kriticos

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Robin Davis

October 10, 2013 at 10:02 PM

This is cute and creative. Fun and humorous. Someone find art a bike repair shop. LOL nice job

Poet Destroyer A

November 21, 2012 at 7:47 PM

ha ha love the limerick KyleStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

October 2, 2012 at 10:56 AM

Reading you and the comments make me understand "life in America" as I wouldn't learn it from my English grammar books...hahaha. Thanks a lot. So, that was WalMart!? Interesting!:) Hanitra

Poet Destroyer A

July 16, 2012 at 4:12 AM

Kyle, stopping by to say good night~PD

Jslambert Mister Roboto

November 9, 2011 at 4:31 AM

If you ever see any of my comments on here, You will see that one of my favorite things to say is "SUPAH DUPAH" and this is a Supah Dupah Limerica,,,reminds me of one I wrote recently called "VIAGRA Falls" ....Walmart theme is dope!

Gwendolen Song

October 15, 2011 at 8:25 AM

Careful with the WalMart bikes, bud. Made in China...doesn't that tell u enough? lol. A very funny limerick...and oh so true. :)

Kyle Kriticos

October 9, 2011 at 10:41 PM

Hahah ya I bought a bike at good old wally world......maybe ill stick to electronics and bags of chips when I go there :P

Jack Horne

October 9, 2011 at 8:15 AM

LOL, you bought a bike at WalMart's presumably? Loved this fun piece

Judy Ball

October 8, 2011 at 10:09 AM

Now he's trying a skateboard, But his progress is not going forward. He lost his balance, Because of the wrong stance, In hospital now, he's in 4 ward. Sorry Kyle. Couldn't resist. ;) Loved your little limerick so much I had to play with it a little. God Bless, JB :)

Kyle Kriticos

March 19, 2018 at 11:23 PM

llollll that is really good too now it's a double limerick!