Super Dooper Computers

Computers are around us everyday 
Some help us, whilst others let us play
No matter our ages
They can put us in rages
As they carry on with their display

They have been here for many a year
Sumerian abacus, engineered
Even a textile loom
Made this business boom
Which brought us to the modern ones near

They come in all shapes and forms
In our lives, on our wrists their adorned
Even the time they can tell
From their chip like cell
When they work, it's great, they perform

So without them we'd be awfully lost
Although our tempers can become crossed
To them I'll never condemn
Terrific silicon gems
One day us humans will be bossed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/25/2011 4:07:00 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, James : )
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Natalie's "Talkin' Tech" contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2011 3:47:00 AM
hey James, congrats on your win, david
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Date: 7/24/2011 8:27:00 PM
Congrats James on your fantastico win with this unique poetry luv... ultimate expressions for a delightful read always James.. enjoy..
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Date: 7/24/2011 5:53:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of natalie, james
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Date: 7/24/2011 5:52:00 PM
James-Congrats. on your win in my contest :) Great work!
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Date: 7/16/2011 7:52:00 PM
Computers are evil. They pick on me all the time. Really good read here my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/16/2011 3:58:00 PM
A great verse James. I've only had mine since Nov. but can't imagine life without one. You say it so well.
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Date: 7/16/2011 3:21:00 PM
James this is quite brilliant and touches on all facets of the ire that arises from computer woes and error messages.. just had a fit trying to post comments ever so slow on PS... good luck in Natalie's contest luv.. this is great as always..luv..
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Date: 7/16/2011 3:17:00 PM
well, I think we are already being bossed by them. or at least downsized. haha. Good one, James. Good luck in the contest!
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