Notes About The Poem

"The true chains are not of iron, but of a kindness too cunningly worn."

- Poet

A moral reckoning

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sunward in the oubliette

cunning whist’red the wind
through bulwarks of my youth
cloaked in kindness its sly craft
masked in plotting feign’d truth

the scent of damp stone and moss
clung to my marrow
voices in each gust

defiant i stood on the brink
slumber’ring in ire’s enlace
with sly deceit danced outcome
and beguiled dreams took stage apace

the bitter tang of shadowed air
the quell of trembling leaves
twilled with the evil of withheld grace

vain are stars that once foretold
boast not what thou’st dealt
the conqueror an umbral mist walks
in wilderness where none hath knelt

soil crumbles underfoot
cold dew bites the ankles of night

sweet—and awful—sang the muteness
after the third new moon pass’d

grim hunger prevails
hangs where sojourners draw breath
their last

the coppery taste of fear
lingers in the throat
as stillness gnaws the spectral lungs

not for bread i starve
but for meaning
in vale and entombed mountain roam

judgment echoes field and forest
sunward songs mount toward doom

rustle of leaf
bark-scratch under nails
carry the weight of unseen eyes
thorn’d breaths of abyssal wind

my failing prostrate i ascribe
to flagrant flame
incurably untam’d
a whirling squall of dissipation
drunkenness of nameless claim

the acrid smoke of wasted fire
licks the tongue of legacy
shadow’d cinders curl in the mind

indignation binds me captive
a dungeon endless dark and grim

vile guilty stricken wholly
no mortal left to shield or limb

chains clash rattle in marrow’s obscurity
iron scents the air with accusation

yet manifest soulless one
fervent fierce and torn

momentary affliction sways
in transient shape of mourn

cool sweat bitter ashen traces
mingle with tremor of fleeting heart

tired i am
weak i am
worn i am

yet still
i rise
though wretched rent
to meet the sweet and awful dawn
with every scar fetch’d and spent

light trembles on dew-beaten leaves
first air pungent and raw
fills lungs with promise
of endurance

cunning whist’red the wind
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Hind Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 4:53 PM
This has such a deep honesty that I am afraid would scare some people. Wonderful work, Daniel
Anaya Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 12:03 PM
Daniel, Hell for no reason is hell indeed. There are surely nightmares many of us wish to be guided out from & into the light. Be it the cause of your scenario or not, it harbingers the discovery of the promise of a brighter day. Alludes to carrying one's Cross to glory. He who has the why can endure almost any how_Nietzsche Faving
Buhagiar Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 11:18 PM
Some people prefer poverty, as it makes them want more.
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 11:09 AM
Interesting lines penned. Creative way to putting it all together. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 10:31 AM
I enjoyed reading your powerful "sunward in the oubliette" write. Great quote and picture. Have a blessed/wonderful weekend writing away............
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