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Sunstay

Don't go down sun
Please stay up a little more
Your colors are spectacular
And though I've seen them all before
I never seem to tire
Of beholding pretty things
And there's someone who I'm thinking of
Your equivalent like she sings

For in her voice so beautiful
Live poems I write of
And the subject of that poetry
Is the woman who I love
And if she were right here with me
Together we would stand 
And watch your brilliant colors fade
Before heading to dreamland
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Scott Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 12:24 AM
Wow. This got me in the feels - love this, really love it :)) + fave
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October 11, 2023 at 2:54 AM
Thank you
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