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Sunshines

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Laura Spears

Date: 4/27/2010 6:33:00 PM

Clever twist on an old rhyme. Congrats on the win.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 4/10/2010 7:17:00 PM

Seeyam congratulations. Real cute one-Robert

James Fraser

Date: 4/10/2010 4:44:00 AM

Seeyam, many congratulations on your win in Brian's fine contest >> James

Mitch White

Date: 4/9/2010 10:03:00 PM

True, Congrats Seeyam on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2010 9:49:00 PM

Good one, Seeyam. Congratulations!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2010 2:27:00 PM

This is very clever Seeyam. Congratulations on your success in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/9/2010 1:01:00 PM

Good advice and a winner. Congratulations. Joyce

Date: 4/9/2010 12:12:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Enjoyed it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/9/2010 8:00:00 AM

Clever and fun footle. Congratulations, Seeyam!! Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/9/2010 5:28:00 AM

Congrats Seeyam on your winning poem in the footle contest.. a creative write to honor so ..so enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/9/2010 4:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's Footle contest Seeyam. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 4/9/2010 12:57:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Seeyam.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'EVERYMAN'S EKPHRASIS' is now open

Seeyam Brjmohun

Date: 4/5/2010 3:35:00 AM

It's my pleasure Brian :)

Brian Strand

Date: 4/5/2010 1:09:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Seeyam.Rgds Brian