Sunshines

Make hay
Don't play
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Spears Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 6:33 PM
Clever twist on an old rhyme. Congrats on the win.
Dufresne Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 7:17 PM
Seeyam congratulations. Real cute one-Robert
Fraser Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 4:44 AM
Seeyam, many congratulations on your win in Brian's fine contest >> James
White Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 10:03 PM
True, Congrats Seeyam on your win
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 9:49 PM
Good one, Seeyam. Congratulations!
Devonshire Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 2:27 PM
This is very clever Seeyam. Congratulations on your success in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 1:01 PM
Good advice and a winner. Congratulations. Joyce
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April 9, 2010 at 12:12 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Enjoyed it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
Richards Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 8:00 AM
Clever and fun footle. Congratulations, Seeyam!! Love, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 5:28 AM
Congrats Seeyam on your winning poem in the footle contest.. a creative write to honor so ..so enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Brown Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 4:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's Footle contest Seeyam. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 12:57 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Seeyam.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'EVERYMAN'S EKPHRASIS' is now open
Brjmohun Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 3:35 AM
It's my pleasure Brian :)
Strand Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 1:09 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Seeyam.Rgds Brian
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