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Sunshine - Much Maligned

Sunshine at dawn blasts sunbeam holes in clouds.
A celestial searchlight celebration,
with silent cheers unheard by sleeping crowds
who slept through their snooze alarm dictation.

When sun's up high in sky it's warm and bright
all paramount, pervading, endearing.
People scurry about in new day's light.
Ignoring the sun as source, disdaining.

Noon is so hot, it's time to cover up.
On goes the slip, slop, slap, perhaps a hat.
People duck, hide, in shadows envelop.
Sun becomes a lethal glare to combat.

Sundown, is the only time when sunshine
gets worshipped - toned down, dimmed to red, in shrine.

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6 March 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Anderson Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Thanks for your comments. It may be too didactic for a traditional sonnet, but so be it!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 6:04 AM
A wonderful sonnet about sunshine! Love the thought spoken in the final verses! GL in contest!
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