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Sunshine

Sunshine By: Rachel A. Gallegos 4-19-13 Sunshine that is what I call you. Because when you smile it’s like a ray of light hitting my soul, it is what I call you because my body soaks up the vibrations of your voice as if it were vitamin D. Sunshine is your name because the warmth I feel from your skin is like a perfect summer’s day. Sunshine because the Moon even on its brightest nights could not possibly compare to the light you shine on your cloudy days, Sunshine because without you growth seems so far away.

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Skat A

Date: 6/21/2016 12:45:00 AM

RACHEL, Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words. Keep sharing and writing poetry. ~SKAT~

Ediruma Edward Eric

Date: 4/24/2013 4:42:00 AM

so polite and welcoming...

Ayesha Karim

Date: 4/22/2013 8:26:00 PM

Good poem. The title is cool too.

John Posey

Date: 4/20/2013 6:50:00 AM

Great post, Rachel. This initial post on PS will, no doubt, bring many who want to read more results of your poetic talent.... Jake

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/19/2013 10:14:00 PM

Hi Rachel, the imagery is wonderful .... and the gift you see through this certain person. I have myself my own sun rays at home... an excellent poem.... , "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

Skat A

Date: 4/19/2013 8:22:00 PM

Rachel , this is very lovely with a warm sunny feeling :-), Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT"