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Sunshine

First glorious happy soft morning rays, To the 'dismal dreary darkness', they bid adieu; The 'golden gleaming glint', to all living beings, a boon; The still lake sparkles in 'bright light' beams; Oh how the pebbles 'reflect' the sun, making a picture 'perfect'! Such is the beauty of the radiant sunshine that eagerly I await for, every morn, to bask in its warmth. Can there ever be a 'greater gift' here in earth from Above? Date: 09/03/2022 The A's Have It Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2022 10:27:00 AM

I see you won this one. Sorry I am so late to congratulate you. You did an awesome job!!

Weston Gregory

Date: 10/21/2022 10:23:00 AM

It's great that something that is just so out there still amazes us when it's espouse on. Nice write.

Mark Massey

Date: 10/6/2022 7:31:00 PM

Such a vivid and passionate piece. There is a sense of warmth as you read. Beautifully done Anitha

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/6/2022 9:01:00 AM

Superb write Anitha - congrats on your top win!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2022 7:22:00 AM

Hi Anithia, This is just stunning. Outstanding imagery! Congratulations on a well deserved win. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2022 7:20:00 AM

Way to go with this winner Congratulations..Thanks for sharing. Creative and well thought out. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/5/2022 10:24:00 PM

Thank you so very much Sara for the visit, comment, and the congrats... Hugs... ~ Ani

Joseph May

Date: 10/2/2022 5:47:00 AM

Wonderful write Anitha, Congrats on your win

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/5/2022 10:24:00 PM

Thank you so very much Joseph for the interesting contest and my placement... God bless... ~ Ani

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2022 10:35:00 AM

write again, Anitha. I'm waiting!!

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/5/2022 10:23:00 PM

Sure my friend, trying to find time... Hugs... ~ Ani

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/1/2022 3:49:00 AM

christurajalex@gmail.com (all lower case. Thank you).

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/1/2022 9:47:00 AM

Ok Chris... I have sent you a mail... Thank you... God bless... ~ Ani

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/21/2022 6:50:00 PM

Dear Ani, I have missed your poems and your heart! Lovely tribute to our sun and its warmth. I love how you notice the small things and are always in gratitude. Big hugs and love to you my friend, Susan :)

Michael Tor

Date: 9/16/2022 3:37:00 AM

Ani your cleverness in creating this fine Poem of sunshine, shines in reading. A superb writing to read and enjoy. I felt those rays from your words and interaction with all you shared. Love this from you. A favorite... Blessings your way...

John Watt

Date: 9/15/2022 11:04:00 PM

Ani, such a challenge handled so smoothly by your capable poetic talents (not easy to find words ending with 'u'!) I love the positivity of this message with the warmth of the sun pervading every line! Love all your phrasing. Best wishes in the contest. Many blessings ~ John

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2022 5:54:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Not so easy to write with the requirements that have to be done. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my blog. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 9/10/2022 1:41:00 PM

Excellent entry for a tough form. I enjoyed the uplifting thoughts of sunshine in the morning, Ani. Should do well in the contest! Thanks for sharing, and thanks for the visit and comment on my poetry. Hugs, Bill

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/7/2022 7:25:00 AM

Excellent entry to this difficult challenge I love your sunshine poem SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2022 4:04:00 PM

You are such a pro, Ani, to be able to complete a challenge like this one. I just don't think it can be easy for someone not a native English speaker. VERY well done

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2022 11:55:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my blog. We just had some rain, but it did not last long. Clouds still persist. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/6/2022 7:06:00 AM

Such a glorious, happy poem dear Anitha, good luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings JENNIFER

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/3/2022 11:02:00 AM

Glorious poem, Ani--like the sunshine it describes. You executed perfectly despite the complexity of contest rules. Best to you.