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maybe I'd have soared if only I'd kept my dream I was waked too soon Written on August 2, 2020 If only, maybe, sometimes Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/8/2020 2:56:00 AM

Beautifully portrayed tender emotions in such few words Evelyn. Congratulations on your win! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/8/2020 8:26:00 AM

Thank you, Aditi. Your words mean so much. :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/6/2020 7:51:00 AM

Lovely brevity, Evelyn ~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/6/2020 10:10:00 AM

Thank you so much, Line. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2020 12:02:00 PM

- Catch your dreams, Evelyn :) - Congratulations on your win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/5/2020 3:20:00 PM

I always try to, Anne-Lise. Thank you so much. hugs :=)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/5/2020 10:23:00 AM

A haiku with meaning on multiple levels, Evelyn. Really nice. Congratulations!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/5/2020 3:32:00 PM

It's wonderful to know you found such meaning in my poem. Thank you for telling me so, Sam, and also for your warm congratulations. :=)

Silent One

Date: 8/5/2020 8:20:00 AM

Nice on Evelyn.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/5/2020 8:35:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words, and for sponsoring that exciting and interesting contest, which I enjoyed very much.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/3/2020 2:14:00 PM

Most dreams are forgotten by the time one wakes up, and that is when one begins to soar! (From snore to soar seems to be God's plan). Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/3/2020 2:18:00 PM

Thank you for your thoughts and kind congratulations, Rico. :)