Sunset's Reflections

The majesty of a magenta sky
    fades perceptibly before my eyes

  Can it not be bottled before it dies
    Sigh ~ back to catching fireflies
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George Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:29 PM
Some scenes we wish to bottle up as we did with fireflies ! Lovely penning !
Wolf Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 8:17 PM
Pity we can't bottle some of those scenes! Thanks, Valsa.
Hankins Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 8:44 AM
Superb, my friend. I particularly like the phrase, "Can it not be bottled before it dies." Afraid not, so enjoy it while you can. On the other hand, tomorrow's dusk will bring another one!
Wolf Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Thanks for the love on this one, Milt!
Tor Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:29 AM
A favorite Gershon. One of the best I have read this year. Love the pause wanting to bottle before it dies and realizing you can't with the pause, some disappointment in you, and helping you cope by catching the fireflies as an alternative to your failure to bottle. Magnificent, so much inferred in so few words. Clever and creative. It is an out of the Park Homerun my friend...
Wolf Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Really appreciate your enthusiasm for this one, Michael. Can't thank you enough. Happiness and Health, Gershon
Mccann Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 11:38 PM
This is my favorite of your nature poems, the wishing to bottle it! Just so. Elizabeth
Wolf Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 8:08 AM
Thank you for such a sweet comment, Elizabeth. Call me 'Nature-Boy,' I guess. ~ Mowgli
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