Sunset Walk, Sunrise Snapshot

     A sunset walk past a garden
       midday frolic in the meadow
     Early morning glide through a forest
       sunrise snapshot of a glistening lake

    How we take our eyes, our ears 
      our five senses for granted
    With all of them implanted
      this earth is enchanted
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Gauthier Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 5:51 AM
lol ~ I've been enjoying my stroll through your poetry this morning, Gershon ~
Tor Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 11:00 PM
this one is another favorite Gershon just love the message and how you wrote this. Bravo...
Crandall Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 9:11 PM
Nice poem, true words!
Elliott Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 2:46 PM
Hi Gershon, God's nature is amazing with His flora and fauna. We must as humankind take better care of it. Lovely poem. Shalom :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 10:39 AM
All our senses are a gift from God. So is every lovely garden!
Lawless Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 4:30 AM
A sunset walk has a way of knocking some senses into us......hehehehee
Mckeithan Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 5:44 PM
Wonderful poem Gershon. We are so inundated by technology we let our God given senses atrophy
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 5:05 PM
lovely portrait of life's nuances!
M  Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 4:59 PM
So very true BB we do take them for granted until they start to falter and start to fail us!….well said! Debx
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