Sunset Tableau

Sunsets move silent
                                           Peace a theme of dreams
                                               Lost in its motion,
                                             of colors and schemes
                                                 This visual clock,
                                            now long banding threads
                                                



One dayI saw sun set forty-four times! You know you're feeling very sad,
sunsets are wonderful

contest Design your Tableau
Frederic Parker  10/16/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 9:29 PM
Wonderful win, Frederick. Way to go!! I really enjoyed this one too.
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 9:29 PM
oops. sorry I always want to put a K on the end of your name!!
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 7:23 AM
- There are many that I have read before .... and many who not arrived at the winners list .... but, everyone can not win! - Really hard to judge .... (glad it's not me :) - In my eyes, everyone is so beautiful written! - CONGRATULATIONS !!! - Have a restful and lovely weekend,Frederic - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 7:05 AM
Creative winner..Way to go..Congrats on your great win..Sara
Callus Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 6:32 AM
And...back again Frederic, this time with congratulations....very merited. Have a nice day. // paul
Yvonne Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 3:56 AM
Congratulations on your win with this gem.
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 1:36 AM
Congrats on the top place win, Frederic
Johnson Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 5:25 PM
Im so happy for you..this is wonderful and a big congrats. The visual clock is pure genius..BG
Gorelick Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 5:24 PM
Im so happy for you..this is wonderful and a big congrats. The visual clock is puregenius..BG
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 4:43 PM
Congratulations on your win Frederic. Very beautifully written.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 3:55 PM
Beautifully penned Frederic many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
Callus Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 5:23 AM
Captivating sunsets reach out to us through peace and tranquility...silence a uniting factor. Well expressed Frederic. // paul
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 12:23 PM
- Beautiful Sunset Tableau, Frederic ! - I have also chosen theme: 2 - Good luck in the contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 10:14 AM
Beautiful write, Sunsets are beautiful " Lost in it's motion, of colors and schemes " thank you Frederic :) eve
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