Sunset Stills

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Inspirational photo of Eve Roper prompted this repost from 2007

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/stone_skimming_1261799

above the still strand
shrieks of seagulls
die on the inshore breeze-
our twin footsteps disappear
as sunset dissolves

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Heidi Sands

Date: 6/22/2020 3:59:00 PM

Oh, this is so nice Brian :)

Brian Strand
Date: 6/22/2020 4:15:00 PM

Cheers Heidi,sunsets are no soul searching

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/22/2020 6:58:00 AM

Awesome words. Bless you dear friend. Love sent your way, Gina

Brian Strand
Date: 6/22/2020 7:54:00 AM

Bless you Regina& thanks,stay creative