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Sunset Sigh

Sunset Sigh pretend it was me and not you in love. Cupid put down his arrows, they were aimless, anyhow - he sees that now. still, there’s a beauty and a cutie so Cupid decides to shoot his mouth off. the couple turns, a miss…what is this…what is this… each off their rockers, rocking away from dusk to dusk, wondering why they can never find love. the moon drifts, separate beaches sunset-sigh. Cupid reminisces about the two who got away…did he save the day… two fish caught in love’s net sent back to school, then all alone. the woman says to no one particular, but really to Cupid…pretend it was me the man says the same…was love really that lame…two arrows, side by side in glass frames… the ones that got away.

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Date: 8/14/2025 5:14:00 PM
an entertaining and delightful poem, Kim. Smiling! Thanks, hugs, Sara
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Date: 8/14/2025 4:56:00 PM
Lovely poem about Cupid.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2025 5:10:00 PM
Thank you! Just having a little fun!
Date: 8/14/2025 6:01:00 AM
Delightful tale; that's what happens when Cupid buys a new bow on Ebay.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2025 2:21:00 PM
He really should watch where he buys them…lol!
Date: 8/13/2025 8:22:00 PM
So close and far away - "side by side in glass frames… the ones that got away." very profound, a difference in Cupid for sure :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2025 5:09:00 AM
Thank you, Paige! :)

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