Sunset Shadorma

Sunset. Shadorma

Winter sun
On the coast of death
White coffins
In the bay 
Hoisting sail for unknown seas  
As darkness descends
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Collins Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 10:03 AM
right up my alley, Jan. If this were a painting I'd hang it over my computer.
Hansen Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 12:41 PM
thank you Kathryn
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January 6, 2012 at 7:50 AM
That image conveys a ghostly dread, well done, Brenda : )
Hansen Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 8:09 AM
thank you Brenda
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