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sunset shadorma

Sunset. Shadorma Winter sun On the coast of death White coffins In the bay Hoisting sail for unknown seas As darkness descends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/25/2012 10:03:00 AM
right up my alley, Jan. If this were a painting I'd hang it over my computer.
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jan oskar hansen
Date: 1/25/2012 12:41:00 PM
thank you Kathryn
Date: 1/6/2012 7:50:00 AM
That image conveys a ghostly dread, well done, Brenda : )
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jan oskar hansen
Date: 1/6/2012 8:09:00 AM
thank you Brenda