Nette Onclaud Poet Triolet

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Sunset Red--Visual 2

When sunset red unfurls and glows
each beam an opal groove and veil,
till August floats  in warm repose
when sunset red unfurls and glows.
The nightingales warble in rows
Bewitching hours as I exhale;
When sunset red unfurls and glows
each beam an opal groove and veil.



Andrea Dietrich's One Lovely Summer Triolet
5/29/2015.

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Kim Merryman June 13, 2015 at 8:46 PM Your words paint a beautiful picture, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Skat A June 13, 2015 at 6:27 PM NETTE, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 5:37 AM Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2015 at 12:53 AM Very beautiful, Nette. The warble line threw off your meter. Otherwise, I'd have placed this higher! Congrats and thanks for supporting my contest.

Alexis Y. June 13, 2015 at 12:41 AM You have penned a beautiful piece. What an amazing sunset. Congrats on your win :) Alexis

Sneha Rv June 1, 2015 at 8:51 AM This is so pretty, dear Nette!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D

Paul Callus May 31, 2015 at 2:21 AM Hi Nette! This visual has proved to be quite popular. Yours is one of the very best that I have read; it exudes warmth as it flows softly along. #7 Hugs // paul

Afolabi Muideen May 30, 2015 at 10:21 AM What a fabulous write Nette, It's enjoyable as always. Thanks for shared, excellent piece,,,,,,,A M.

Judy Konos May 30, 2015 at 9:44 AM Girl! I was strolling around SOUP by country...WOW Nette on Cloud 9 souping from the Philippines! Charice is from the Philippines..she sings so great...and so is this poem...Thanks....

Laura Leiser May 29, 2015 at 6:46 PM Wow, this is absolutely beautiful, Nette. One of the best triolets I've seen so far. Good luck in the contest :)

Thomas Martin May 29, 2015 at 10:53 AM Memorable poem! Liked your use of rhymes here.

Richard Lamoureux May 29, 2015 at 8:59 AM It is indeed lovely Nette! Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison May 29, 2015 at 7:54 AM So so beautiful Nette I can picture your image so vividly - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless May 29, 2015 at 7:44 AM Nette, I know how difficult this form is (at least for me) but on reading yours I think "damn, she makes it look and read so easy"

Kp Nunez May 29, 2015 at 7:36 AM Wow. Just perfect, Nette. Loved this! huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 29, 2015 at 3:25 AM - A beautiful sunset that glows in your words, Nette - Enjoy reading - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)