Sunset Massacre


The vampire exited the saloon doors 
covered in blood her gaze enamors;

Cowboys on horses stop mid motion 
to see what was causing the commotion;

Mysterious woman dealing black jack,
apparently someone had tried to attack;

Whiskey shots were barely dispensed,
outlaws came in and the energy tensed;

No intention of drawing first blood,
then he asked to play five card stud;

She said ‘I’m not part of the party;
You don’t gamble with the referee.’

He tried to hit her she broke his neck;
Then came his friends, a train wreck;

Not fond of utilizing easy murder,
 off she rides from this sunset massacre.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 4/25/2024 8:25:00 AM
Melani, Dear Melani, your narrative unfolds like a scene from a wild west tale, where the tension hangs thick in the air like dust in a saloon. Through each line, the atmosphere crackles with danger and intrigue, drawing me into a world where the unexpected unfolds with every turn. I loved how your words spin a captivating yarn of bravery and survival against a backdrop of chaos, leaving me spellbound till the very end. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/25/2024 9:10:00 AM
Thank you for your kind feedback. I love writing about vampires. They captivate me.
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