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Sunset Massacre

The vampire exited the saloon doors covered in blood her gaze enamors; Cowboys on horses stop mid motion to see what was causing the commotion; Mysterious woman dealing black jack, apparently someone had tried to attack; Whiskey shots were barely dispensed, outlaws came in and the energy tensed; No intention of drawing first blood, then he asked to play five card stud; She said ‘I’m not part of the party; You don’t gamble with the referee.’ He tried to hit her she broke his neck; Then came his friends, a train wreck; Not fond of utilizing easy murder, off she rides from this sunset massacre.

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Date: 4/25/2024 8:25:00 AM
Melani, Dear Melani, your narrative unfolds like a scene from a wild west tale, where the tension hangs thick in the air like dust in a saloon. Through each line, the atmosphere crackles with danger and intrigue, drawing me into a world where the unexpected unfolds with every turn. I loved how your words spin a captivating yarn of bravery and survival against a backdrop of chaos, leaving me spellbound till the very end. - Blessings, Daniel
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 4/25/2024 9:10:00 AM
Thank you for your kind feedback. I love writing about vampires. They captivate me.

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