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Sunset Haiku

sun shrunk to a pin evening, tiptoed right in cat paw on my chin 1-12-2022 ~2~

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Fj Thomas
Date: 6/22/2022 12:16:00 PM
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Sounds like one happy cat! Hello Pangie :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/23/2022 4:08:00 AM
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EJ...snuggling at night is the best. Jumps on my tummy...encircles my neck with her paws. Instant sleep after feeling and hearing her purr. Heaven on earth? To me, yes it is. Thanks..Panagiota xx
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Bill Baker
Date: 6/21/2022 2:15:00 PM
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Nice Haiku, fun change of direction with the kitty in the last line. I liked it. :-)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/23/2022 4:03:00 AM
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Well. Bill you know the third line in a Haiku must change course. I read Haikus here that do not do that. They are not Haikus. This is also a rhymed Haiku. I never knew they could be rhymed. Have your read Paul Callus? He is a master at the Japanese form. For me, the most difficult of all to write! Hugs, Panagiota xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/13/2022 3:13:00 PM
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Hello Panagiota, I like your imaginary sun set. Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2022 4:07:00 AM
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Hello Panagiota, the poem felt peaceful calming. Enjoy your day Panagiota.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/13/2022 3:21:00 PM
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Darlene.. I liked it, too! Simple and a sweet picture.... Thank you very much! Huggs, Panagiota xx
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Elena Eagle
Date: 6/13/2022 9:36:00 AM
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How sweet and lovely. Really enjoyed this one.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/13/2022 12:17:00 PM
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Thank you, Elena. Huggs, Panagiota xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/13/2022 7:55:00 AM
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I can just picture the scene Pangie, you and Irene as the day came to an end. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/13/2022 12:16:00 PM
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Yes, you have the picture right on focus. It’s one of the best parts of my day, Gratefully, Panagiota xx

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