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Sunset Haiku




          sun shrunk to a pin
          evening, tiptoed right in
          cat paw on my chin


                   1-12-2022
                      ~2~

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FJ Thomas

June 22, 2022 at 12:16 PM

Sounds like one happy cat! Hello Pangie :)

Panagiota Romios

June 23, 2022 at 4:08 AM

EJ...snuggling at night is the best. Jumps on my tummy...encircles my neck with her paws. Instant sleep after feeling and hearing her purr. Heaven on earth? To me, yes it is. Thanks..Panagiota xx

Bill Baker

June 21, 2022 at 2:15 PM

Nice Haiku, fun change of direction with the kitty in the last line. I liked it. :-)

Panagiota Romios

June 23, 2022 at 4:03 AM

Well. Bill you know the third line in a Haiku must change course. I read Haikus here that do not do that. They are not Haikus. This is also a rhymed Haiku. I never knew they could be rhymed. Have your read Paul Callus? He is a master at the Japanese form. For me, the most difficult of all to write! Hugs, Panagiota xx