Sunset Bedtime

SUNSET    BEDTIME


The sunset kisses the ocean’s fragrant lips of salt, 
Lapping ‘neath the sky’s purple veil and vault. 
In perfumed mellow waters, in their glory golden, 
Deep sighs the sun, great lazy yellow melon. 


Glowing, flowing his way to rest, down drawn 
To make love to the sleep-hazed horizon:
Their golden bed where fused desires deep
End in surging final flare-out - and then sleep.


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Written  18  July  2012  by  Sydney Peck
Entered in Francine Roberts’s  Contest      Top five Sunsets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 29, 2012 at 10:15 PM
SIDNEY, a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in Francine Roberts' contest... these are some nice winning poems in her "Top five Sunsets" ... always~ PD
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July 27, 2012 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Top Five Sunsets" contest Syd. Love, Carol
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July 26, 2012 at 4:53 AM
Once a gain congratulations Sidney it could have doubled in the colours contest and been a double whammy love it xx
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July 25, 2012 at 11:05 PM
love the lazy yellow melon.
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July 25, 2012 at 11:05 PM
wow, for me it's one of the best for sure! Congrats in the contest, Sidney.
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July 25, 2012 at 8:17 PM
A lovely, tranquil scene! Congrats, Sidney. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Guzzi Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 3:48 PM
ahhhh very Shakespearian? Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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July 25, 2012 at 12:55 PM
Congradulations on your well deserved win! This poem is amazing! Jane XoXo
Johnson Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 11:31 AM
Well said and a winner. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Williams Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 10:48 AM
Sydney super congrats on your win, excellent write...David
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July 25, 2012 at 10:37 AM
KC, this is incredible!... you slammed it; congrats!..:)huggs!
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July 25, 2012 at 8:39 AM
congrats on your Honorable Mention Syd, great job ( and which is it really? Sid or Syd?)
Beck Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 12:21 PM
Thanks vry much Francine...a great challenging contest....by the way it is S Y D....best wishes
Jones Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 10:02 PM
Pretty shmaltzy.. sounds nice! Namaste~N
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