Sunset Beauty

Sunset beauty 





as the sun slides down 
twilight wears an orange gown
undresses in dark ....



Written Nov 19th, 2015
For contest by Nayda

Awarded HM 
 
Also entered for contest "Any poem written this week" 
Sponsor- SKAT A

Awarded 1st place

Entered for twilight contest by Nayda
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tor Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 12:55 AM
Great imagery. Loved this one Dr. Sharma congratulations!!!
Y. Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 11:39 PM
Dr. Upma, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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December 4, 2015 at 10:12 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your sweet win. Enjoyed your entry. LUV SKAT
Merryman Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 6:44 PM
I really like this, Upma! Great imagery! Congrats on your fantastic 1st place win! Love, KIm
Delaney Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 2:10 PM
Love this, Dr Upma: Congratulations on this beautiful personifcation of the sun. SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 10:05 AM
One of my faves in this contest. BIG congrats.
A  Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 4:00 AM
Wonderful win. SKAT
Tagore Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 10:24 PM
Wow! Different ink from Dr. Sharma... enjoyed the imagery... Warm regards, Bobby
Roper Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 8:35 PM
Wow! Magnificent write, congratulations on your win!
Dutta Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 8:24 PM
Excellent Haiku. Feeling so happy to see you at top. Congrats. AnishaD
Aul Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 4:53 PM
Very nice haiku, congrats........ George
Lawless Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 2:28 PM
This is a lovely, sensuous peek into mother natures boudoir
Lane Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 11:40 AM
Most often we see the sun given the gender of a male, but your personification of it as a woman was wonderful. Congratulations, Upma.
Inman Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 10:30 AM
Very nice, beautiful imagery.
Haight Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 10:15 AM
Nice imagery in your Haiku, Dr. Upma! Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 9:48 AM
Romantic Upma!
Negron Flores Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations in the placement of the contest Dr. Sharma.
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