Sunset Beauty

Sunset beauty 





as the sun slides down 
twilight wears an orange gown
undresses in dark ....



Written Nov 19th, 2015
For contest by Nayda

Awarded HM 
 
Also entered for contest "Any poem written this week" 
Sponsor- SKAT A

Awarded 1st place

Entered for twilight contest by Nayda

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/5/2015 12:55:00 AM
Great imagery. Loved this one Dr. Sharma congratulations!!!
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:39:00 PM
Dr. Upma, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/4/2015 10:12:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your sweet win. Enjoyed your entry. LUV SKAT
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Date: 11/26/2015 6:44:00 PM
I really like this, Upma! Great imagery! Congrats on your fantastic 1st place win! Love, KIm
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Date: 11/24/2015 2:10:00 PM
Love this, Dr Upma: Congratulations on this beautiful personifcation of the sun. SuZ
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Date: 11/24/2015 10:05:00 AM
One of my faves in this contest. BIG congrats.
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Date: 11/24/2015 4:00:00 AM
Wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 11/23/2015 10:24:00 PM
Wow! Different ink from Dr. Sharma... enjoyed the imagery... Warm regards, Bobby
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Date: 11/23/2015 8:35:00 PM
Wow! Magnificent write, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/23/2015 8:24:00 PM
Excellent Haiku. Feeling so happy to see you at top. Congrats. AnishaD
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Date: 11/23/2015 4:53:00 PM
Very nice haiku, congrats........ George
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Date: 11/23/2015 2:28:00 PM
This is a lovely, sensuous peek into mother natures boudoir
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Date: 11/23/2015 11:40:00 AM
Most often we see the sun given the gender of a male, but your personification of it as a woman was wonderful. Congratulations, Upma.
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Date: 11/23/2015 10:30:00 AM
Very nice, beautiful imagery.
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Date: 11/23/2015 10:15:00 AM
Nice imagery in your Haiku, Dr. Upma! Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/23/2015 9:48:00 AM
Romantic Upma!
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Date: 11/23/2015 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations in the placement of the contest Dr. Sharma.
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