Notes About The Poem

Written July 27, 2018

Entered in the Contest, "Sonnet, Old or New," Judged January 6, 2025 - N/A

Now For The Contest, "Second Chance For Non-Placement"

Sponsor, Constance LaFrance

Sunset At Dusk


There's something great about a day that's done;
   fulfilled or not- yields space for a new slate.
Each sunset paves a path to morning's sun;
     inspires to dream about tomorrow's fate.

On pleasant days, sun-setting soon enshrouds
     the dusk with special colors in our sky,
like soft pink-orange streaks 'neath shiny clouds
     that blend with golden rays to beautify.

What peaceful thoughts pervade the weary mind-
     the glow of skies diffused, yet powerful.
New dawn brings hope, but sunsets leave behind
     the feeling that the day was wonderful.

This gift at each day's end comes faithfully.
     The sun at dusk grants closure- peacefully.
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Raven Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Hi Sandra, dropping by with my congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, much deserved Sandra. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Haight Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Thank you very much, Mike! Much appreciate! Sandra :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 10:29 AM
Beautiful, Sandra. Congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 6:57 PM
Thank you so much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 2:55 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Sandra, with this stunning piece! : )
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 5:26 PM
Thank you so much, Connie! Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Congratulations on your win. Once again beautiful poetic imagery.
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Thank you very much, Susan. Hugs, Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Not surprised to see this on the winners list Sandra. Congratulations. Tom
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 5:27 PM
Thank you for your uplifting comment and congrats, Tom! Sandra
Pinet Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations Sandra, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 5:28 PM
Thank you, Emile, for another fine contest, my nice placement, and your congratulations. Much appreciated. Sandra
Juman Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 9:50 PM
Sunset and sunrise are the most auspicious time in each day It the time the heart finds its self Excellent write Sandra
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Thanks so much, Al, for your visit and lovely comment. Much appreciated. Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 10:44 PM
Sunsets are awesome but dawn seems to last longer. I think it is because waiting in the quiet dark for sunrise just feels holy! Your poem is very beautiful and I adore twilight just before the dawn and just after sunset when all is in silhouette. Beautiful lines Sandra that I am sure to see this on the winning list! : )
Haight Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thank you for your lovely, empathetic comments, Connie. I love them both, but my muse chose 'sunset' this time! Hugs, Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 5:05 AM
Beautiful sonnet Sandra, love the line ,with golden rays to beautify. Superb imagery . Tom. Good luck.
Haight Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 8:18 AM
Thank you very much, Tom. I appreciate your visit and supportive comments very much. Sandra
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Such wonderful imagery Sandra, I feel at peace reading your lovely sonnet, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. I appreciate your visit and lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra
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