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SUNSET vs' SUNRISE

SUNSET vs' SUNRISE ** Sunset ** The afterglow flame Creeping under the cold creek Daylight, gone again ** Soap Dish ** Daytime TV blues Tune in tomorrows soap box Dramatic, dusk wind ** Evening Star ** Tired sound waves Waiting for eventfulness Hour of the beast ** Atmospheric ** Phenomenon Light Under the zodiacal night Kisses and shivers ** Twilight ** Locked in my slumber Vampire face awaken Thirst like no other ** Sundown ** Aurora fading What goes up, has to come down crowfeet, black and white __________________________ ~~ Tequila Sunrise ~~ Break of day, snooze Cockcrow without a whisper Coyote Ugly ~~ DAWN ~~ Same Situation Mentally agonizing; Sunny side egg twist ~~ New Moon ~~ beautiful sun rays Sun awaits for ebony beautiful moonbeam ~~ Adjust the Setting ~~ Breathtaking sunrise Beyond the horizon sky Sherbert colored beach ~~ Skipping Rocks ~~ Glitter dusk on lids Birds sing me a lullaby Kids playing by lake ~~ Sunrise Industry ~~ Shining superstar Golden streets with no stop sign Lunch time draws nearer by;p.d.

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Date: 1/12/2018 7:48:00 PM
Remember when you did this long series of KU!!! I just loved it when you had us do haiku and other fun contest ideas. I came way back here to say thanks for your wonderful comments. I really do hope you will take my advice and write poems for contests. I would rarely write if not for that motivation. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/6/2014 9:19:00 PM
PD This is a very creative and unique string of poetry. Each one different but descriptive and fun in their own way. Thank you for the nice comment on my Poetry poem.
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Date: 8/20/2013 9:14:00 PM
awesome.... The Skat
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Date: 8/20/2013 9:53:00 AM
A lovely string of haikus, congrats on the fine win!!
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Date: 8/19/2013 5:06:00 PM
Thank you very much for the win... lovely Leonora... xox~ Linda
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Date: 8/18/2013 4:00:00 PM
most inventive Linda congrats on your win Shadow x smile
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Date: 8/18/2013 8:40:00 AM
This is brilliant, the one form that eludes me and you write a chain of them. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/18/2013 8:32:00 AM
congrats on a great win with these awesome Haiku Linda
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Date: 8/18/2013 4:52:00 AM
Hello my everdearest sis! You really surprised me with your super amazing entry.Thank you, thank you ever so much! Biggest hugs! Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win with this spectacular & outstanding poem! I extremely love every haiku in its chain and so enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your full support my dearest greatest poet & loving sis. Have a blessed day! Big hugs & kisses! Love m4ever, Leonora
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Date: 8/1/2013 3:32:00 PM
An amazing dream sequence PD. - a real liberation in this passionate writing style - I supose its all a matter of reflection my Sphinx - J.A.B. %
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Date: 6/17/2013 10:51:00 AM
excellent chain Linda each a jewel in its own right love it Shadow x
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Date: 1/10/2013 9:32:00 AM
All excellent/outstanding chain of Haiku's by my only forever greatest poet and sis Linda! Thank you so much my dearest sis and friend for sharing all your stellar masterpieces and everything! love you much forever, Leonora
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Date: 12/30/2012 5:03:00 AM
oh boy these are so good, tell me Linda, why does one with so much talent now here with you and those like you in past history, want to destroy everthing they have created, in your case beautiful poetry, and remember this,, the amount of joy you give to one's like me.. is amazing, but when you fall we all fall, that is the power you wield~~~~~~~~
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Date: 7/1/2012 10:32:00 AM
lovely haiku, PD. Have a good weekend : )
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Date: 5/14/2012 1:02:00 AM
I love the rendition you got here, I wish you could put it (condense) into a single Haiku,, but I guess that's the supper secret formula. Whenever you come round- I get a good feeling. I guess I just love u babe! FOR U- My very own flapjack empress.. that constantly shows me her joy.. If we ever were to meet- would it ever be as good as this? Heaven only knows. I actually have your number in my phone, only it's under your real name.. which I can't recall - loll. I believe it's starts with an S ??? Anyhow I long to t to you. ):}
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Date: 11/28/2011 6:25:00 PM
of course you MUST use the animals name because the animal IS the season word! :)
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Date: 11/26/2011 4:06:00 AM
Beautiful haiku's. Thanks for reading mine and making a comment.
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Date: 11/14/2011 8:39:00 PM
Wow, what a creative writer...and so excellently executed. Lovely imagery, wonderful thoughts, a delight of passion and true choice of words. You are a master! Truly enjoyed these. Million thx for sharing.
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Date: 11/14/2011 12:47:00 PM
A wonderful list of Haikus P.D., you have definitely got them covered, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 11/13/2011 11:05:00 AM
You got those crow's feet on your eyeballs, p.d. Your Haiku are totally stimulating. Love, daver
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Date: 11/13/2011 8:30:00 AM
ooh, really enjoyed your sunrise and sunset haiku! So cool and I still feel bad I missed on sunset contest-- enjoyed each one of these haiku! dawn one with the sunny side up was fun! and haha you're funny, of course bomb doesn't rhyme with heart! I wanted to put in there "fart" --THAT rhymes with heart ;) since sweet potatoes make you fart, right? hahahah :D
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Date: 11/13/2011 7:27:00 AM
You have the honor now of being the Queen of Haiku!!! What a flow and yes as stated below "epic"... wondeful work as only your sweet mind and fingers can create... MJF
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Date: 11/11/2011 2:26:00 AM
=) THIS IS A TRUE HAIKU! I love how you made this whole poem--it's epic!! (DWB)
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Date: 11/10/2011 9:49:00 PM
Irma, you got it now, didn't you? Took me about 40 minutes! ARe you saying the Soup closed your contest for having more than one contest going on at the same time? I could have sworn two hours ago that there were plenty of spots left on sneaky ninja! WAs I wrong about that? And I hope Top of the world contest didn't get removed, did it?
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Date: 11/10/2011 2:17:00 PM
a very active mind! light & love
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