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The Busiest swallows and adamant cranes settled at last Alluring starlings in murmuration caught my gaze Roosting of these birds proclaimed a marvelous wonder A beautiful young girl wore the fluffy gown and the corners were stitched with a golden lace Golden Angel was ready for the photoshoot against a purple BG The clear blue sky camouflaged with sparse hues Light orange color adorned the passing clouds And the mesmerizing purple color intimated the SUNSET

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Date: 4/9/2018 2:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Supraja. Well done.
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Date: 2/19/2018 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations Supraja on your fantastic first place win with your beautiful and enchanting poem expressed with brilliant imagery. ~ Susan
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Date: 2/19/2018 7:03:00 AM
Congrats Supraja on your first place win!
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/20/2018 2:54:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 2/18/2018 4:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Supraja :)
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/20/2018 2:54:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 2/18/2018 12:10:00 PM
Some brilliant lines in this poem Supraja... congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/20/2018 2:51:00 AM
Thank you for the placement in your contest... I didn't see the contest before and it was bound to fill and so I entered my old poem... Sorry... I will try to submit new poems henceforth...
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Silent One
Date: 2/19/2018 2:12:00 AM
Would have been nice that you wrote a new one though..
Date: 2/18/2018 12:05:00 PM
- Supraja a piece of art from nature and your pen ... Congratulations !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 2/20/2018 2:52:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 10/24/2017 8:05:00 AM
Great imagery my friend..
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Date: 10/23/2017 8:35:00 PM
You painted a pretty picture, Supraja. What's a BG?
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 10/23/2017 10:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea... BG means Background...

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