Sunset

The Busiest swallows and adamant cranes
                settled at last
Alluring starlings in murmuration
               caught my gaze
Roosting of these birds proclaimed
               a marvelous wonder

A beautiful young girl wore 
      the fluffy gown
and the corners were stitched
    with a golden lace
Golden Angel was ready for the photoshoot
    against a purple BG

The clear blue sky camouflaged
         with sparse hues
Light orange color adorned
      the passing clouds
And the mesmerizing purple color
   intimated the SUNSET
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:32 PM
Congrats on your win, Supraja. Well done.
Ashley Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations Supraja on your fantastic first place win with your beautiful and enchanting poem expressed with brilliant imagery. ~ Susan
Pandit Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Congrats Supraja on your first place win!
Kannan Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 2:54 AM
Thank you...
Leiser Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Congrats on your win, Supraja :)
Kannan Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 2:54 AM
Thank you...
One Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:10 PM
Some brilliant lines in this poem Supraja... congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Kannan Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 2:51 AM
Thank you for the placement in your contest... I didn't see the contest before and it was bound to fill and so I entered my old poem... Sorry... I will try to submit new poems henceforth...
One Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 2:12 AM
Would have been nice that you wrote a new one though..
Andresen Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 12:05 PM
- Supraja a piece of art from nature and your pen ... Congratulations !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 2:52 AM
Thank you...
One Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 8:05 AM
Great imagery my friend..
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 8:35 PM
You painted a pretty picture, Supraja. What's a BG?
Kannan Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 10:08 PM
Thank you so much Andrea... BG means Background...
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