Sunset

burning horizon-
Evening Star appearing,
as maize harvest dries

africaimagerylifenaturesunsethaiku

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Constance La France

September 30, 2016 at 1:37 PM

Teddy this is beautifully penned and congratulations on your win ~

Teddy Kimathi

September 30, 2016 at 4:07 PM

Thank you so much BW, for your warm applause!! *^_^*

Poet Destroyer A

September 29, 2016 at 10:44 PM

Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest Blog "Beautiful, But Fragile" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Teddy Kimathi

September 30, 2016 at 2:33 AM

Thank you so much Linda, for your kind applause!! *^_^* <3

Andrea Dietrich

November 18, 2015 at 7:49 PM

Good one. I liked the way the last line related to the first.

Teddy Kimathi

November 19, 2015 at 7:54 AM

Thank you so much Andrea! *^_^* I remember one time you had advised about haiku writing. Thanks so much. Have a lovely evening. It's 5 pm in Kenya. Maybe I should say "have a good day?" lol.