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Sunset

an amethyst sky

fades into the dark of night --

stars pierce the darkness

11/16/15
For Nayda's Sunset - haiku contest

Copyright © Kim Merryman | Year Posted 2015

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May 14, 2016 at 9:27 AM

This is truly beautiful, Kim! You paint with words! What a pity that sometimes we miss reading such delightful poems; luckily I clicked on it today:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

November 24, 2015 at 10:03 AM

beautiful, Kim. Congrats to you.

December 1, 2015 at 9:03 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea!

November 24, 2015 at 3:59 AM

sweet and beautiful ,,,skat

December 1, 2015 at 9:03 PM

Thank you so much, SKAT!

November 24, 2015 at 12:42 AM

Congrats to your well, deserved WIN Kim! ;-)

December 1, 2015 at 9:02 PM

Thank you, Teddy!

Emmanuel Brian Oule

November 23, 2015 at 11:34 PM

Wow Mere fact Stars is in the Poem Stars give hope always Congs Kim on this Poem.. Nice Pictures

December 1, 2015 at 9:01 PM

Thank you, Bryan!

Anindya Mohan Tagore

November 23, 2015 at 10:10 PM

Wonderful imagery... although amethyst sky is a very rare view in my metro life. Warm regards, Bobby

December 1, 2015 at 8:59 PM

Thank you, Bobby!

November 23, 2015 at 8:31 PM

Excellent haiku, Kim, congratulations on your win!

December 1, 2015 at 8:58 PM

Thank you, Eve!

November 23, 2015 at 8:31 PM

Wonderful Haiku Congrats Kim. Anisha D

December 1, 2015 at 8:59 PM

Thank you, Anisha!

November 23, 2015 at 4:51 PM

Congrats on your win.......... George

December 1, 2015 at 8:57 PM

Thank you, George!

November 23, 2015 at 1:50 PM

Awesome, Kim. Congratulations on your win. Janice

December 1, 2015 at 8:56 PM

Thank you, Janice!

November 23, 2015 at 11:35 AM

It's quite beautiful, Kim. Congratulations.

December 1, 2015 at 8:55 PM

Thank you, Lin!

November 23, 2015 at 10:26 AM

Lovely, Kim.

December 1, 2015 at 8:55 PM

Thank you, James!

November 23, 2015 at 10:08 AM

Lovely Haiku, Kim. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra

December 1, 2015 at 8:54 PM

Thank you, Sandra!

November 23, 2015 at 9:46 AM

A7 Kim! Beautiful!

December 1, 2015 at 8:53 PM

Thank you, Balveen!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

November 23, 2015 at 9:17 AM

Congratulation in the placement of the contest Kim. Vivid description of a sunset.

November 26, 2015 at 6:39 PM

Thank you for my placement, Nayda! I'm so glad you liked my haiku!

November 18, 2015 at 12:44 PM

"an amethyst sky" I love that line. great write! #7

November 22, 2015 at 9:41 PM

Thank you, Njeri!

November 17, 2015 at 11:44 AM

ahhh HA! good entry Kim, thanks for the comment on my sci-fi!

November 22, 2015 at 9:40 PM

Thank you for your comment, Debbie, and you are welcome!

November 17, 2015 at 8:59 AM

This is simply gorgeous. What a wonderful moment to capture in this brilliant haiku.

November 22, 2015 at 9:38 PM

Thank you so much, Heather!

November 17, 2015 at 12:28 AM

A well thought out work, kudos Kim...hugs

November 22, 2015 at 9:36 PM

Thank you, Kayod5!

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