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Sunset

an amethyst sky fades into the dark of night -- stars pierce the darkness 11/16/15 For Nayda's Sunset - haiku contest

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/14/2016 9:27:00 AM

This is truly beautiful, Kim! You paint with words! What a pity that sometimes we miss reading such delightful poems; luckily I clicked on it today:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2015 10:03:00 AM

beautiful, Kim. Congrats to you.

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 9:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea!

Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 3:59:00 AM

sweet and beautiful ,,,skat

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 9:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, SKAT!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 11/24/2015 12:42:00 AM

Congrats to your well, deserved WIN Kim! ;-)

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 9:02:00 PM

Thank you, Teddy!

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 11/23/2015 11:34:00 PM

Wow Mere fact Stars is in the Poem Stars give hope always Congs Kim on this Poem.. Nice Pictures

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 9:01:00 PM

Thank you, Bryan!

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 11/23/2015 10:10:00 PM

Wonderful imagery... although amethyst sky is a very rare view in my metro life. Warm regards, Bobby

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 8:59:00 PM

Thank you, Bobby!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/23/2015 8:31:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku Congrats Kim. Anisha D

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 8:59:00 PM

Thank you, Anisha!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/23/2015 8:31:00 PM

Excellent haiku, Kim, congratulations on your win!

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 8:58:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

George Aul

Date: 11/23/2015 4:51:00 PM

Congrats on your win.......... George

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 8:57:00 PM

Thank you, George!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/23/2015 1:50:00 PM

Awesome, Kim. Congratulations on your win. Janice

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 8:56:00 PM

Thank you, Janice!

Lin Lane

Date: 11/23/2015 11:35:00 AM

It's quite beautiful, Kim. Congratulations.

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 8:55:00 PM

Thank you, Lin!

James Inman

Date: 11/23/2015 10:26:00 AM

Lovely, Kim.

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 8:55:00 PM

Thank you, James!

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/23/2015 10:08:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Kim. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 8:54:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/23/2015 9:46:00 AM

A7 Kim! Beautiful!

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/1/2015 8:53:00 PM

Thank you, Balveen!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/23/2015 9:17:00 AM

Congratulation in the placement of the contest Kim. Vivid description of a sunset.

Kim Merryman
Date: 11/26/2015 6:39:00 PM

Thank you for my placement, Nayda! I'm so glad you liked my haiku!

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 11/18/2015 12:44:00 PM

"an amethyst sky" I love that line. great write! #7

Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:41:00 PM

Thank you, Njeri!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/17/2015 11:44:00 AM

ahhh HA! good entry Kim, thanks for the comment on my sci-fi!

Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:40:00 PM

Thank you for your comment, Debbie, and you are welcome!

Heather Ober

Date: 11/17/2015 8:59:00 AM

This is simply gorgeous. What a wonderful moment to capture in this brilliant haiku.

Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, Heather!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/17/2015 12:28:00 AM

A well thought out work, kudos Kim...hugs

Kim Merryman
Date: 11/22/2015 9:36:00 PM

Thank you, Kayod5!