Sunset

Sunset
golden rays fading across western horizon… whispering good-night
11/16/2015 Poem of the Day - 11-18-2015
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Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Right on. Divine little poem, Pandita.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:35 AM
I am really happy that you stopped by to read my poem. Thank you so very much, Line Pandita
Duncan Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 3:24 AM
Nice haiku :)
Sietesantos Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 8:41 AM
Hi Debbie, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliment! Thank you so very much as it means a lot to me! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Michaels Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 5:03 AM
Lovely imagery. Another great write from you, Pandita!
Sietesantos Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Dear John, it is so nice to receive your wonderful complimentary words which are so appreciated! Thank you so much for the visit! Pandita
Chakrabarty Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 11:26 AM
great flavour, Pandita. Love.
Sietesantos Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 11:41 AM
My dear friend Rajat, it is such a pleasure to hear from you after such a long absence! I hope all is well with you! I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thank you so very much as it means a lot to me! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Canama Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:09 AM
Oh, I can imagine the wonderful scenery of your great haiku on sunset, Pandita.
Sietesantos Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Hi Estela, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thank you so very much as it means a lot to me! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Dom Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 6:47 AM
I am late to read this - "whispering good-night".
Sietesantos Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 3:05 PM
My friend, you are not late - I am just happy that you stopped by to read my poem. Thank you so very much, Michael! Pandita
Yuhas Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 5:51 PM
Very nice Pandita, Haiku is very new to me. Have not tried it, but I like it. Thanks, Pete
Sietesantos Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 8:43 AM
Thank you, Pete, for stopping by and leaving your great comments and compliments! Every time I write a haiku, I do a lot of research on the form, both classical and modern, to try to get it right. But please do give it a try soon as I think you will have some fun with it! Pandita
Lindley Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 1:13 PM
Superb Haiku my talented friend. A7
Sietesantos Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 10:23 PM
Dear Robert, it is so nice to receive your wonderful complimentary words which are always appreciated! Thank you so much for the visit! Pandita
Aaron Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 9:17 AM
Wonderful haiku. You've described the perfect day.
Sietesantos Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 9:54 AM
Hi David, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thank you so very much as it means a lot to me! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 4:27 PM
I believe I read this was selected for POTD! Yes, I see it was. A great choice. Congratulations Pandita. This poem is as breathtaking as the sunset!
Sietesantos Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 11:23 PM
Hi Connie, thank you so very much for your congratulations and compliments! I am so appreciative of this POTD honor! Have a great weekend! Pandita
Manassian Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Beautiful, my dear....sweet and serene. Congrats on POTD. :) Hugs
Sietesantos Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 10:20 AM
Hi Eileen, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thank you so very much as it means a lot to me! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Tor Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 6:41 PM
Congratulations Pandita
Sietesantos Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 10:19 AM
Thank you, Michael, for stopping by and leaving your great congratulations! Have a wonderful day! Pandita
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 5:30 AM
This tugged at the heartstrings Ian - we need to remember the hopeless all year round - the issue seems to be highlighted more around the festive season but it never goes away:-( hugs jan congrats on POTD:-)
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 11:43 AM
oh this has happened before - when POTD changes it seems to skip to the new poem :-( hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 11:43 AM
when I click on POTD it still goes to Ian's! hugs jan xx
Sietesantos Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Hi Jan, I think you meant to send this to Ian:-)! But I'll accept it on his behalf:-) Pandita
Bhurani Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:39 PM
You haiku is as unique as the beauty of the sunset....best wishes
Sietesantos Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 9:47 AM
Hi Rizwana, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thank you so very much as it means a lot to me! Have a beautiful day! Pandita
Karim Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:29 PM
This is such an amazing Haiku!
Sietesantos Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 9:39 AM
Thank you, dear Ayesha, for your wonderful compliments and kind support for my work! Warmest regards! Pandita
Callus Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 4:01 PM
A creative and lovely poem, Pandita! Congrats on POTD!! Regards :) // paul
Sietesantos Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Hi Paul, I am utterly delighted about this great honour! Thank you so very much for leaving me your always superlative compliments and congratulations! Enjoy this beautiful day! Pandita
Bateman Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 2:08 PM
An Outstanding Haiku Pandita!! A "SEVEN" for sure, and Congratulations on the "POTD" Honor. Well-Deserved for this fabulous write. Cheers and Best, Gary
Sietesantos Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Dear Gary, I am so thrilled about this honor! I thank you so much for your high praises and high score! Warmest regards. Pandita
Hunjeri Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 1:13 PM
Beautiful haiku Pandita. #7
Sietesantos Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Thank you, Njeri! I very much appreciate your kind compliments and high score! Have a great day! Pandita
Promise Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Excellent haiku and congrats on it making POTD. Could not have said it better. Enjoyed it much. God bless.
Sietesantos Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 9:23 AM
Thank you so very much, RP, for your congratulations and compliments! I am so appreciative of this POTD honor! Have a great day! Pandita
Meade Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 11:14 AM
Absolutely love this one! I am a very visual person and this one painted a grand vista upon my imagination.
Sietesantos Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 9:13 AM
Hi David, I am so happy that you enjoyed reading this piece! Many thanks for your wonderful compliments, my friend! Pandita
Romaine Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 11:04 AM
Hey Pandita, a warm and hearty congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD!! Such a beautiful Haiku about the sunset - in so few words - but it stirs up so many thoughts on what transpired throughout the day. Excellent writing and expression! Be Blessed, Neva
Sietesantos Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 9:12 AM
Dear Neva, thank you so very much for your thoughtful words and compliments that brightened my day! I really appreciate your kindness! Warmest regards. Pandita
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 10:34 AM
- Oh... so lovely and sweet, Pandita :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sietesantos Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 8:48 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, many thanks for your wonderful, thoughtful comments/congratulations! Have a great day! Pandita
Y. Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:37 AM
Pandita, this is beautiful. Congrats on getting the poem of the day! Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis
Sietesantos Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 8:03 AM
Alexis, thank you so very much for your congratulations and compliments! I am so appreciative of this POTD honor! Have a great day! Pandita
Sergi Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 6:55 AM
Hi Pandita: A beautiful descriptive poem on SUNSET. My compliments!
Sietesantos Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Hi Ralph, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thank you so very much! Pandita
Yvonne Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 6:37 AM
Gorgeous, simply gorgeous, a fav for me!
Sietesantos Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:25 AM
Hi Maurice, I am utterly delighted! Thank you so very much for the superlative compliments! Enjoy this beautiful day! Pandita
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